Stuck. (Currently re-writing the entire story )

Chp.3

                       Karlos' father had woken up from his slumber do to the noise his wife was making downstairs, when he went down to what was happening he was his wife with a little girl next to her passed out. He went over and asked " who is this?, why is passed out? " his wife answered him by saying " she was at the door and knocked, then she passed out." He was a little confused about something's, but before he could ask the girl had woken up she also looked confused.  " why hello there, do you feel okay?" She asked " just a small headache,  that all. " the girl replied in a timed voice.
                   They decided to wake Karlos up and tell him what had happened, " So your telling my that she passed out when you opened up the door." Karlos responded in a bit harsh. " yes that what we're saying!" His parents responded " I can hardly believe it." He said now irated. " Karlos is it? " the girl asked " yeah it's." he responded " your actually glad that I'm here, are you Not?" The girl asked, Karlos was a bit freaked out about that.