Review of title: i actually really love the title its so cliche but thats what makes it intresting
Cover: blah its okay but i guess it could be better. Remember people judge a book by its cover very important.
Genre: teen fiction. Again i love teen fiction
Review of the summary: i love the way she say he is like a prince and im like juliet waiting to be reserved for a guy. Something like that i took it from the top of my mind. I also like hiw she says shes a werido and she spies on him.
Spelling/grammer: i know you said it isnt edited and i also know that when you type fast you make mistakes but i noticed that it wasnt your spellings that where bad but your tenses. So when you go back and edit the chapters check your tenses.
(If you want any help editing i can help you if you want)
Overall story: i actually love the plot if the story and how its cliche. Its actually refreshing. I love the characters but not si much alec..such a dick btw.
Would i recommend the story:
Yessss of course after it is edited your story will be amazing!!!
Keep writing hun and remember if you need any help im up for it. :)
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