Listening to the wilds

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Review of title: in a way I understand the title but then I think again why is it the wilds. I like the way it makes me think about it.  That's a good thing to have with a title because the title is one of the most important part of the whole book

Cover: the the cover was okay but maybe it could be redone but it depends on your personal taste.

Genre: adventure

Review of the summary: I actually love the summary it's different. I feel like there lots of life lessons mixed in with a bad character to make it.  It really reflects well on the book

Grammer/spellings: I found a couple mistakes with the tenses that I couldn't help noticing but most of the spellings where fine.

Overall story: I like the story. It's different. Nobody writes a story about a spoiled guy that goes to learn. It's all about romance these days. I love how you teach the readers as well as your writing and also how you go back in "time" so we can find more information about the characters life. I don't like how you change from your style of writing to another one. It's like your writing in detail and so good and then suddenly there's a bit that's different and not to the level as the other one and i feel like it spoils it also that sometimes you talk to the readers.
Like you say 'let us go in the past.....'
(I don't know he exact words)
Yeah I feel like that spoils it and you have it in different places in your book as well. Maybe you could try flashbacks.???

Would i recommend the story: yes the story is good but you have to have a lot of patience with the main character he can get irritating at times. 😂

Sorry for the long wait as it takes me a long time to read as much as the book I can and in some cases all of it.  I hope your review was worth the wait.

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