The mysterious girl

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Review of title: the mysterious girl. 

i actually really like this title a bit long and hard to remember but it makes you asks questions and if a title makes you ask questions it good. 

Cover: its okay but i think you should ask people around wattpad for a new one since people judge a book by its cover. there's plenty on talented people around wattpad that are willing to make covers

Genre: teen fiction

again teen fiction is fine :)

Review of the summary: the summary is actually really interesting

i was a bit confused but once i read the first chapter i understood what was going on

Grammer/spellings: spellings seemed okay but there were some grammar mistakes i couldn't help but notice when the tenses were wrong.

also you seem to like using the semi-colon lots of times in one chapter. i understand how they might make your writing seem better but sometimes you have to vary your sentences length and that makes your writing better and much easier to read.

Overall story: so far the story seems interesting. i love how the girl gave the advice to the boy and he then tried to find her. i also like how they both have problems they would bond over them. since you only have 3 chapters i can only judge the plot from what there is so far but i will advise you to carry on.

Would i recommend the story: yes.

so far it good.

-roberta

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