Hello all me lovely readers!
I'm so sorry to say that I will not be continuing my book........
......On this account.
I will be trying to improve my story on another account:
chickenLittle777
I will restart my book there and improve it.
I have come to a conclusion as to why my book isn't liked, or why my votes are low.
1) my punctuation and vocabulary, as someone has pointed out, is very poorly. I will try to get someone to edit it properly
2) my story is confusing and my plot isn't great but something to be improved.
and
3) my cover: it isn't really that appealing and everyone knows that on wattpad, every book is judged by its cover and tittle. It may sound harsh, and i don't want to get any hate, but its true.
I'm sorry for any inconvenience, but it has to be this way.
please follow my other account
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Thank you my beautiful readers
over and out.
YOU ARE READING
Babysitting The Andersons
Jugendliteratur"And last but definitely not least, there is Nathaniel or Nate who is 18 years old, turning 19 and is smoking! You should have seen his abs! there was like an eight pack! and, and he got that sexy v thang and, and and-", I tuned everything out. Then...
