I've written my first porn screenplay. What do you guys think?

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"As you all should have learned in this class, we live in a multicultural society," droned Mr Bartholomew, the Downtown High social studies teacher, in his usual boring monotone. "For this weeks homework I want you to select one culture and spend some time immersed in the culture. I want a five hundred word essay on your findings by Monday." There was a groan from the class, they'd been hoping to get away without any homework. A hand shot up at the back of the class. "Yes Danielle?"

"Can we pair up for this sir?" asked the blonde student. Danielle was the drop dead gorgeous captain of the school cheerleading squad. Every boy in the school desired Danielle and her best friend Devon, they were nicknamed the "Double D's". Partly for their names and partly for their remarkably perfect D sized racks. The two girls made every male in the school, both teacher and student alike, go weak at the knees and hard in the crotch. Danielle's face was the perfectly sculptured face of an angel, fine featured with a flawless complexion, a face that a Hollywood Starlet would die for. Devon was equally beautiful, with the face of a she-devil that men would kill for, a living, breathing succubus put on the earth to tempt even the most strong-willed of men. Both girls had bodies that were every man's ideal fantasy. Slim, toned figures, ultra long legs, tight, nicely rounded buttocks, curving hips to a slender waist and massive tits, who's impressive size seemed to defy gravity.

Mr Batholomew sighed, every time he handed out homework Danielle would ask the question, and invariably the following Monday he would receive identical essay's from both Danielle and her best friend Devon. "Very well," he agreed, deciding it was not worth fighting it.

"Yippie!" squealed Devon in joy, tossing her long silky brown hair.

"Okay, that's all," said the social studies teacher. "I'll see you all Monday."

"What culture are we going to pick?" Devon asked Danielle as they headed for the door. Devon didn't even notice Billy Myers staring at her perfect ass it swayed seductively in her short skirt. "Our gardener is from China I think," she offered helpfully. "And I love Chinese food, especially the one with noodles."

"No, I've got a much better idea," said Danielle smugly as they headed down the hallway, drawing numerous leering male gazes at the slight jiggle of their ample bosoms and the movements of their long tanned legs. "The geeks."

Devon frowned at that. "Ew, what about them?" she asked.

"We'll study nerd culture," explained Danielle. "I bet no one else will do that and we're bound to get an A plus!"

Devon smiled, "That's brilliant Danielle! Do you know any geeks that will help us though?"

"No," Danielle admitted with a shrug that did mind boggling things with her massive jugs. "But they're boys, when was the last time a boy said no to us?"

"True," Devon said with a wicked grin. "Let's find us some geeks!"

The two gorgeous cheerleaders made their way to the place they thought most likely to contain geeks, the school library. Sure enough, in one corner, amongst the boring science books that Devon and Danielle had never visited, sat David and Murray. They were both skinny, had thick rimmed black glasses, buckteeth and annoying laughs. Definite nerds and perfect subjects for the girls' social studies assignment.

Danielle took a deep breath, causing her gigantic chest to swell out even further. "Let's do this!"

With that both girl approached the two nerds who were in heated debate and did not even notice the approach of the two prettiest girls in school.

"The changes Jackson made were just sacrilege!" insisted Murray, his face passionate as he argued with his best friend David.

"No way!" protested the pimple faced David, equally zealous. "The book would never have translated to the big screen without making at least some changes!"

Danielle pointedly cleared her throat. The two nerds turned in surprise and both almost fainted at the sight of the two stunning girls standing in front of them.

"We need your help," said Devon, after a moment as she realized the boys weren't about to speak.

David swallowed, but still didn't answer, his wide-eyed gaze draw involuntarily to Danielle's swelling chest and low cut blouse. Murray nodded slightly but otherwise remained silent.

"We're doing a social studies assignment and need to spend some time with you two," Danielle tried to explain.

"With us?" Murray managed to gasp, why were the Double D's even talking to them?

"Yes!" Devon confirmed cheerfully. "We need to find out what you guys do."

"Do?" stammered Murray, David merely nodded again.

"Yeah, we'll do whatever you do," said Danielle.

"Do?" repeated Murray, unable to focus his thoughts.

"Yeah, like what are you doing tonight? What do you nerds do on a Friday night?" Danielle asked.

"D&D," David said abruptly.

Devon smiled, "What's D&D?"

"Dungeons and dragons," Murray said after a moments silence when he realized David wasn't going to answer.

Danielle groaned, "That's so uncool."

"No it's not!" insisted Murray, automatically defensive. "It's what's called a role playing game, it's kind of like acting."

"Acting is cool!" Devon agreed. "I want to be an actress when I finish college."

"Whatever," shrugged Danielle. "When and where?"

"Um, 6 o'clock at my place," said Murray. "My big brother Adam is DM."

"DM?"

"Dungeon master," the geeky teen replied.

Danielle rolled her eyes. "Okay boys, we'll see you tonight then," she said, flashing them one of her winning smiles which, had they been standing up would have caused them to go weak at the knees. Both girls then turned and left, making sure to put an extra sway in their hips and give the geeks a thrill as they departed.

"Isn't Tony Saunder's party tonight?" Devon asked her friend.

"Too bad," said Danielle. "I want to get this over and done with so we've got the whole weekend to go shopping."

"Good idea!" agreed Devon quickly.

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