I've written my first porn screenplay. What do you guys think?

Part 2

The girls arrived at Murray's house fashionably late at 7pm that night. Devon wore the same, very short, bright blue skirt and a tight fitting white v-necked t-shirt that she had worn to school that day. The skirt was slit up both sides displaying an ample portion of her long tanned legs whenever she moved. The v-neck of her top plunged deep into her cleavage, giving Murray an eyeful as he greeted the girls at the door. Danielle's attire was equally sexy. She wore a pair of black, low-slung pants that were skintight across her beautifully tight round ass. To avoid a panty line she wore a bright pink g-string, the sides of which were visible above the top of her hipster trousers, displaying a teasing hint for the boys. Danielle also wore a pale pink crop top that came down just below the outthrust shelf of her massive tits and left her flat stomach bare.

Once Murray had managed to get his eyes back into their sockets he led the two sexy cheerleaders into his dining room where the boys had the table set up for their role playing game night. Murray's parents were away for the weekend so they had the whole place to themselves.

Sitting at the head of the table, behind a small cardboard screen that covered a few books, sheets of paper and dice, sat Murray's older brother Adam. Adam was four years older than the rest of them, he had grubby longish black hair that hung in a mess to his shoulders and looked as though it hadn't been washing in several months. His stubbled face was unshaven and gaunt looking, but at least he did not share Murray and David's need for glasses. The older geek's eyes went wide at the sight of the two beautiful cheerleaders. When Murray had said that a couple of girls from school were coming around tonight he'd never even imagined anything like this.

"Um, you'll need to roll up new characters first I guess," he managed to squeak out as the two girls took their seats opposite David and Murray at the dining room table. The girls found a couple of complicated looking forms pushed in front of them, which Adam explained where their character sheets.

"So what class do you want to play?" Adam asked the girls.

Danielle shrugged. "Social studies?" she replied uncertainly.

"No, what class character?" Adam clarified. "Wizard, Warrior, Rogue or Priest?"

"I wanna be a wizard like Harry Potter!" blurted out Devon abruptly. Danielle turned to her brunette friend in surprise, wondering if she was actually getting into this goofy Dungeons & Dragons thing.

"What about you Danielle?" asked David, his voice trembling slightly as he tried to avoid staring at the swelling front of Danielle's tight pink top.

"Warrior maybe," she said with a shrug, picking one of the other's at random.

"Now you need names," said Adam.

Danielle screwed her face up, was this guy thick or something? "We already have names."

"No I mean..oh never mind, just put your own names down," Adam said with a sigh, it was going to be a long night he decided.

"My character is called Veldin the Black!" said Murray theatrically. "I am a mighty wizard like you Devon, only I'm 12th level."

"And I'm Thrud the Barbarian!" exclaimed David, flexing his skinny arms as if he had muscles.

"Err, cool," Devon said, glancing Danielle's way and rolling her eyes.

"Now you need to roll stats," said Adam, handing the girls a handful of dice each. They were all sorts of different shapes and colors and certainly didn't look anything like normal dice to the girls.

"They look a bit like jewels," commented Devon.

"They're called gem dice. Roll the six sided one three times for strength first," said David helpfully. Danielle rolled one of the dice at random. "No, the six sided one!" repeated David, pointing to the most normal looking of the dice.