I've written my first porn screenplay. What do you guys think?

Part 3

"You travel for about five minutes down the straight corridor and come to an arched doorway, the door has long since rotted away and you can see the rusted hinges still hanging from the stone frame."

"I'll walk through," said Danielle with the shrug.

"Wait!" exclaimed David, causing Danielle to jump in surprise. "Let me go first!"

"Too late!" snapped Adam quickly, he was getting tired of these two dumb cheerleaders asking so many stupid questions and ruining his game. He was not going to show them any mercy. "As you step through the door a ferocious four legged beast leaps from the shadows. It has a bear like body with a tentacled head and thick black fur. It immediately attacks you Danielle, taking you by surprise." Adam rolled a dice behind the screen. "What's your armor class?"

Danielle shrugged as David read her character sheet over her shoulder, unable to help himself from glancing briefly into the depth of her cleavage as he leaned over her. "Five," he announced.

"It hits!" said Adam, almost gleefully. He rolled another dice. "Take six damage and make a save verse paralyzation ."

"Oh oh!" said Murray in a worried tone.

"What?" asked Danielle, rather anxiously. "What does that mean?"

David helped out again, he showed her how to cross off six hit points from her rather slim total of ten and then told her to roll a D-20, she needed to get above an eighteen for the saving throw.

"Only a seven," Danielle said once she had rolled, she was getting kind of nervous about what was happening to her character.

"You have been paralyzed," explained Adam. "You can't move a muscle." Danielle instinctively froze in her seat.

David leapt to his feet, jumping out of his chair. "I'll protect Danielle!" he declared bravely, stepping behind Danielle's chair and resting his hands on her shoulders.

"Me and Murray will attack the beast!" Devon said, quickly finding herself getting caught up in the adventure and the fate of their characters.

"Veldin you mean," corrected Murray.

As Murray and Devon started their to-hit rolls against the monster, David stood above Danielle. He noticed that from his current location he had an even better view down the front of Danielle's pink crop top that when he had leaned over to check her character sheet. His grip slightly tightened on her shoulders as he gazed down at the busty cheerleaders lovely breasts. Inside the tight fitting pink top the firm orbs of her tits looked so perfectly round, like two large melons that sat on her chest, just aching to be touched. David sucked a small dribble of saliva that had started to trickle from the corner of his mouth, he was drooling at the sight of Danielle's perfect breasts.

David gave a quiet moan as he gazed down at the angelic eighteen year old, God she was sexy! He barely heard Devon and Murray as they both announced they had hit the beast and were rolling for their damage.

It was almost like an out of body experience, David seemed to watch his own hand slowly descend from Danielle's shoulder. He had absolutely no control over himself as his trembling hand moved down across Danielle's upper chest. The beautiful blonde was so caught up in the battle with the beast that she didn't even notice David's hand moving until it reached her right tit.

David gave an audible moan as he squeezed Danielle's big, succulent breast through her pink top. The large melon completely filled his palm, overflowing as he squeezed the firm round orb, his fingers sinking into the firm flesh. It was the first tit that David had ever groped and it felt even better than he had ever imagined.