(First Drafts)
I was thinking that this was a bit too old and a little bit imperfect. So I am transitioning it to it being in the first stage "First Drafts" before refining each one and expanding my skill in writing. I shall do my best to create the...
"Wait who...who are you?, Wait are you the voice that was talking to me!"
"Yup" The Angel spoke
"Wait, If I'm seeing an angel that means I'm dead"
"Well..." She said
"Yes, I'm finally free!" I was so excited I jumping with joy
"Uh your not dead sorry to say" The angel spoke and I quickly stopped and curled up and role over to one side to another
"Why" I sobbed
"Well in the bright side your two grunkles wanted you to see me" She said
"What?"
I heard a door opening from the mystery shack
I turned around and I saw my two grunkles standing there with an angry face but I usually get all the hate and guilt but it their glare was on the angel
"WE HAD A DEAL THAT HE WILL BE FREE ON HIS BIRTHDAY, YOU LYING LIGHT BALL!" Grunkle Stan said
"Oh...our plan was moved when I addressed my deal with the council and to my brother" The angel
"Uh...G-Grunkle Stan, Gre-Great Uncle Ford what are you three talking about" I said
"Oh...uh...well...it's hard to explain" Great Uncle Ford said
"Well we made with an angel that you see in front of us" Grunkle Stan said
"Yup that's me Mizar the gleeful!" Mizar said
"Wait aren't you that star in the big dipper's constellation?" I said
"Well no It's just a title but my true name is..." Mizar said before getting cut off by Great Uncle Ford
"Don't you say it!" Great Uncle Ford said
"Too late...my true name is Mabel Pines" Mizar said
She's my tyrant sister how did she become an angel and why is she helping me even though she hated me.
I stepped back and felt tears flowing down my face
"Now you done it!" Grunkle Stan said
"Dipper it's fine she's not here to hurt you she is truly here to help you and another note she isn't from this dimension" Great Uncle Stan said
"What do you mean? she's the one who ruined my life" I shuttered
"Well she came from another dimension so that means she's your sister's alternate dimension counterpart but this one is kind and kinda annoying" Great Uncle Stan said
"Hey!" Mizar shouted
I walked up closer to Mizar
"If you are a good version of my sister then show me!" I shouted
"Okay then!" Mizar then snapped her finger then a circle with symbols appeared
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