I Will Survive... Bullied by Kian Lawley(fanfic)

Ch.16 Coma

Hey guys Sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've been really busy. Also I have my first varsity basketball game tonight. Let go ladies!! Anyway here u go
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Kian pov
The lady called us up and says we can finally see Rachel. Conor and Iz get to see her before me so I have to wait a little longer. After they go I sit by myself in the waiting room. Ugh.... I just want to see my baby girl. I miss her so much. My thoughts were interrupted by the little girl sitting next to me. She was holding my hand and crying. "Why are u crying Gabby? Also is ok if I call u Gabby." I ask using a new nickname. Gabriel nods and says,"I'm just so happy that u get to see Rachel soon." She chuckles and then smiles at me. This little cutie is great I absolutely love her. "Hey Gabby will u still be around after all this?" I ask concern because I don't want her to leave. "Kian I will always be there to guide u ok," I start to feel tears come. "I know u might be scared but God will help u through it all that's why he sent me." Her giggle cheers me up a bit. I understand her message, she's an angel. Angel Gabriel. I get it now.
Just then my name is called. I get up and so does Gabby and we walk to the front desk together. "Are u Kian Lawley?" "Yes ma'am." I say in a quick response. "Right this way sir." Did she not see Gabby too or can I only see her? Well anyway we reach the room Rachel is in. I walk in shocked. Seeing her just laying there pale white. Oh I just want to hug her and make her feel safe again. "Oh Rachel I'm a mess without u. Why didn't I do more to help u against your dad. Please don't die, I don't think I could handle seeing the only one I love 6ft underground. Stay with me, I are my everything. I can't go on without u. Y-you are the star in my eye, the pedals to my flower, my core to my apple, and most of all the l-love of my life." I stop for a minute to breath and pull myself together because I've been crying the whole time. "I understand that life isn't far and u feel like u live in hell, but remember I'm always hear. I can help u fight on. We go through the same problems. I know how it feels to think that no one loves u, well. Let me tell u something." I pause collect myself and say. "Rachel I love u more than anything in this world even ask Gabby. I love u with all my heart." I look over at Gabby to see her smiling and getting a little teary. "I just want to say please stay I can make u happy. Life is worth living. And, and I love u." This all came from my heart. After a couple seconds of silence I kiss Rachel on the head. Gabby and I walk to the door to go, but then I see Rachel twitch her arm a little bit. "Rachel?..."
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Wow so what u think. Kian tells Rachel he loves her. Aw how cute! Please vote, comment, and share. Thx love y'all-Cat