Guys, I just had someone tell me that my story is a bit rushed. I'm sorry, I'll try to slow down. I don't really know if it is but can you guys give me feedback? I mean, I know she found her family really quickly, but all Louis had to do was go look them up in the system at XCaliber, saying how he's the leader. Is it Louis and Delilah's relationship that's too fast? The reason for that is because they already knew each other really well, as I have put.
thanks,
Bri<3
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FanfictionShe was told to kill the boy, she was told to leave no trace. But never did she guess she would fall in love... Two years later the girl and boy have a baby. What will happen if XCaliber comes back...? *Alternate Universe* !COMPLETED! Twitter:@XCali...
