Wild wild west wild Pt 2 (ten duel commandment)

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(yeah... Still lots of Hamilton references... Songs used:ten duel commandment & the world was wide enough)

gene and Zane: It the duel commandments! X2 number one!

garroth's P.O.V: I can't believe my baby brother is doing a ten seconds gun duel.... " the challenge:, demand satisfaction, it they apologize no need for further action" he looked at me. " number two, if they don't grab a friend that's you second..." " your lieutenant were there's reckoning to be reckoned." Zane said.

no ones P.O.V: "Have your seconds meet face to face.." Dante sang, "negotiate a peace," said gene " or negotiate a time and place;" Zane growled. "this is a common place, 'Specially 'tween recruits. Gene said.

(okay before I continue, I'm just going to write like all those lazy writers who write like this:

both: Most disputes die and no one shoots!

number four!


garroth: If they don't reach a peace that's alright, time to get some pistols and a doctor on site.

Zane: You pay in advance, you treat him with civility,

gene: You have him turn around so he can have deniability.

five!

Dante:duel before the sun is in the sky,

all: Pick a place to die were it's high I dry!

number six!

Zane:leave a note for you're next to kin, tell where you been, pray that hell or heaven lets you in..

seven!

Dante: Confess you sins. Ready for the moment of adrenaline when you finally face your opponent.

 number eight!

zane/garroth/gene/Dante: Last chance to negotiate, send in your seconds see if they can set the record straight,

(okay, I made Aaron, Aaron burr because get it? GET IT!?)

gene:Zane,

Zane:gene, sir,

gene: Can we agree that duels are dumb and immature?

Zane: Sure, but your man has to answer for his words sir,

 (yeah, now I'm confused but there the lyrics xD)

gene: With his life? We both know that's absurd, sir,

Zane: Hang on, how many men died because Dante was inexperienced and ruinous!?--

gene: Okay, so we're doing this...

number nine!

(okay, so if you can, play Hamilton the world was wide enough)

gene: Look em' in the eye aim no higher, summon all the courage you require and then you count

everyone watching: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9...

gene and Zane: Ten pace fire!

*BOOM*











Zane's P.O.V: I image death so much it feels more like a memory, is this where it gets me?, on my feet or several feet ahead of me? I see it coming, do I run? Fire my gun or let it be? There is no beat, no melody, gene, my first friend, my enemy, maybe the Last face I ever see? If i throw away my shot, is this how you'll remember me? Is this bullet my legacy?

legacy. What is a legacy? It's planting a seed in a garden you never get to see! I wrote some notes at the beginning of a song that someone will sing for me, phoenix drop, you great unfinished symphony you sent for me! A place where even orphan immigrants can leave their fingerprints and rise up! I'm running out of time and my times up! Wise up! Eyes, up.

I catch a glimpse of the other side, Travis leading a soldiers chorus on the other side, my son is on the other side! (zanchi's son) he's with my mother on the other side! Garte is watching from the other side! rise up, rise up, rise up! KAWAII~CHAN.

my love, take your time, I'll see you on the other side... Raise a glass to freedom--...

kawaii~Chan: No. No. NONONO.... I cry endlessly with no emotions I see michi there tears staining her face as well, same with all the other girls but Jay. But she just looks down like the rest of the boys, 'I'm sorry I let this happen to you, if only there was another way....' I see gene walking toward Zane's motionless body burnt I look away, I'd kill him I could;

gene: I shot him right between his ribs.. The girls were crying endlessly, I walk over to him, but I am ushered away and somebody tells me I better hide, I she kawaii Chan and michi, were both at his side when he dies, I survived but I paid for it,

I survived by I paid for it...

kawaii~Chan:I wish I could grant you price of mind, or share a fraction of your time, that would be enough.... I cry on him and kiss him lips before I leave, if he could kiss back, that would be enough.

(I was on the verge of crying literally... Hope I didn't make you guys cry, HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!)

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