The life of Alice

heyyy this is my first time writing a book and i apologize in advance to any grammar, spelling, or any other mistakes i make so please just bare with it. I would also appreciate any corrections u think should be made so dont be afraid to tell me, kay ^_^

I am very insecure about myself so if you could encourage me a little I will make the first chapter out to you. So comment something that will encourage me not to just give up please.

Once there was a girl named Alice Hinaseka. She lives in Tokyo, Japan. she has just transferred to Seihrin high school, she is a freshman as of this year. She stays to herself, she wont join any clubs or sports, she has the best grades, the best looks, and people say she is weird for transferring in after only a month after school started. Until one day a girl sat with her at lunch after a month.

One day Alice got a letter in her locker, it was a love letter. But she didn't know who it could be from for she had become very popular with all the boys.

sorry I have taken so long I have been busy and I have major writer's block. But please comment what you think so far and if you have any idea's I should put in it I would love to know what you guys think ^_^.