What Just Happend..? [Unedited]

Can we Make it..?

#Ren
Umm well Raven... We just did walk through 6 doors already... Aghhhh am starting to get bored Ray do something useful.. :) Hehehhe

#Raven
umm okay i have this device and its a GPS device i think ....so

#Ren
sooo....you are telling me that you had this device since we got in here and you are telling me that now...ughhh!

#Raven
hehe yes...*

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Then we heard footsteps
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#Ren
Raven..did you heard that ..shshshshshs *whispers* come over here and walk quietly ,

we walked and got into a room . it was so dark i could barely see Raven ..

i grabbed her hands and we crouched behind the table

*a person talking*
hey commander i don't think that this is the right place ...?

*Commander responding*
just keep looking we will find her

#Raven
*whispers* look Ren ... am gonna go distract them while you turn this GPS device and use it to run out then i'll follow ...okay?

#Ren
Hell no i'm not leaving without you do you hear me !
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they heard me talking

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Then a guy from the squad yelled.

..HEY i heard something over there come on guys...!!

I yelled to Raven to run

she ran and i jumped in the guy's face i punched him thn started hitting him in his stomach then i stabbed him
he fell on the ground...

but the others has already arrived

#Ren

ohh shit
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they surrounded me and they all had guns

#Ren

ohh what had i got into

*the commander*
well , well,  what did we got over here...?

who are you ....?

you just knocked down one of my best soldiers

you look familiar

#Ren
am just a lost guy ...

*the commander*
then how you finished off my guys

#Ren
i was so scared when i saw him and i attacked him with a knife

*the commander*
okay...

#Ren
I'm nit looking for trouble

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i saw a handgun in the pocket of the guy who was near me..
I

waited still

i grabbed his gun then broke his neck