What Just Happend..? [Unedited]

A dead end..'

#Ren
Then we started walking while i'm pointing the gun at his head then i said
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Where are those devices you're looking for,

*The Commander*

I'm not sure but we located one on our GPS,

#Ren
Then move up and lead us to it

*The commander*

Alright but  can you not point this gun at my head please..?

#Ren
Ohh sorry.....

Shut the fuck up... I don't trust you
I met a lot of guys like you
And I didn't like them so they ended up dead... So shut it and start walking

*The commander*

Alright we arrived,

#Ren
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It was a big hall i guess it's the center of this facility..

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So jeff..
Where's the rest of your crew..

*the commander*

What, what are you talking about?

#Ren
Stop playing stupid
I know you have a crew right in this area.. You thought i didn't notice the device on your left ear?
Now stop fucking around and tell them to show up now.
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*The commander*

Ohh so you're a very careful guy
Hernandez!
I knew it was you
You never died it was all rumors
Hahaha' we exploded you and your mansion ! But you didn't die we knew it.... Such a monster

#Ren
Don't ever call me by that name again!

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Then his crew appeared around us
They looked like professionals

*the commander*
Now drop your weapon
If you wanna live

#Ren
You know i can take you all in a blink of an eye
Such rookies around me
I'll give you all 30 sec to drop your weapons and get on your knees if you wanna keep your pulses running.. '

*the comander*

I guess you didn't get the idea
We're the ones who's ordering you!

#Ren
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Then Raven came in running,
God Damnit! Why did she come at this time!
This way i can't protect her and attack them at the same time Shit!

#Ren
Raven RUN!

#Raven

Oh shit!

#Ren
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They started shooting
So i ran towards her

I got shot in the back then covered Raven with my body
And both of us fell on the ground'

I got up so quickly and started shooting back at them
Then i saw Raven not moving so i picked her up and ran to take a cover
They kept on shooting at us,
Then i realized that Raven isn't breathing... '
She was shot in her stomach!
Then
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