Wera

The Shooting

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The chicks are now starting to grow more feathers as Aine waits and waits for Wera to be hatched. Wera's egg is now making faint sounds again. The season of spring is changing right back into the summer seasons.  The chicks Sparu,Chira,Messou, and Nira where starting to almost starve since the lack of food around their old twig. Aine has a decision to make should she just leave the chicks to get food for them or stay a little longer and run the risk of them starving. Of course being the smart bird she is decides to get food for everyone. She's about to set off with her wings getting ready to glide. Her claws let loose of the old twig home. She points her beak down along with her head. She starts to head down to the ground as she sees something unusual. Up a bit from the bushes was something shining and was slightly brown. She swings with her left wing up in the sky and hears someone chattering with a gun in hand. Pointed exactly where she was Aine was the target. Why were they hunting birds in the summer? She honestly couldn't figure it out. As she was trying to find out what to do his gun was right pointed at her head. Aine notices this and jolts back with her left wing. She hears a big BANG! She's now officially falling down slowly to the ground. Her wing is gushing blood out as she falls slower and slower. Her eyes are wide open scared and frightened that she was going to die. She falls finally onto the ground screeching loudly. Her large beak is up and ready to hurt anyone in her way of getting out of this mess. The shooter picks Aine up as she is screeching he reaches for his duck tape to cover poor Aine's mouth. While he is distracted how ever she starts biting him so much with so much force that he accidentally lets go of her and she falls to the ground. She still has her other wing and feet and mind to get her out of this mess. She starts to sprint as the shooter tries to get her back in his grasp. She gets ready to fly but she sees a worm as well. As she began to set off she grabs it with the tip of her beak and sets of into the air. All though her wound on her left wing is not to severe it's still very painful. Aine makes sure she lands onto a twig a specific twig. ( this is a fantasy book so some things in these books are not real be aware of that.) She begins to land onto the twig it was a beautiful Burreum tree founded only where she was living. She didn't realize that this tree had healing properties in it's tree sap. Aine knew she wouldn't be able to eat the one tiny worm because it was for her chicks and Wera. She had thought she was doomed since she could not eat her chicks food. She wanted them to survive more than her life.  

Hey guys since Christmas is coming up i will be taking a short break since i only have one follower on my page as of right now so i would like to have a great Christmas. I hope all of you enjoy your Christmas. Just know i will be working on this story line more in the 2 weeks i have off. Those who have read this thanks. 

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