I'm ashamed with my previous book 'Maxon's choice.' I'm upset about how ridiculously fast I went through it and the bad mistakes I should have cleared up. This book will have the same idea but I will make this book completely different from Maxon's Choice so I can better myself as a writer.
Going through the comments in my previous book I have been told too many times about how fast I pushed Maxon and America's relationship, and after reading it over and over countless of times looking to revise it I found it would be easier to rewrite the story and take their relationship one step at a time.
I also realized that America shouldn't have given Maxon a chance so quickly seing as what he did and said to her during The one, so I'm changing the storyline up a little to make Maxon work for it and make the book a little more interesting.
Lastly, I will go through my chapters many times before I publish to make sure I worded it correctly to make sure it makes sense, and check for spelling, because I know I personally struggle with that sometimes.
I will update as often as I can but it will probably be about once a week so please give me patience.
Now enjoy!!!
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Maxon's Choice Rewritten
FanfictionI rewrote Maxon's mistake better than the last. It's also completely different but a nice twist itll end the same so read. If you haven't read maxons mistake it's about if Maxon chose kriss. It just so happened kriss couldn't produce an heir and Ma...
