Hey!
This is my first story so please tell me if you have any criticism.
I just thought of this story this morning but if you think this sounds like any other story you have read please tell me so I can change it. I really don't people to think I'm copying them!
Anyway this the Description of the main characters:
Hannah Flanagan:
16 years old
Lives and from Ireland
Is 5"6 and is thin with some curves
Has long wavy dark brown hair
Has light blue eyes with a dark blue rim
Pale with an oval shaped head with a few freckles.
Not an emo or a prep somewhere in the middle
Finn Smith:
16 nearly 17 year old
Lives in and from New York
Is 6"3 with an athletic well-built body
Has shortish sandy hair
Has deep brown eyes
Has a sun-kissed tan
Prep
Jack Kelly:
17 years old
Lives in the same town as Hannah
Is 6"1 and skinny but has some muscle
Has short black hair with a fringe that sweeps across his face
Has bright green eyes with flecks of blue
Is quite pale with flawless skin
Emo
Thanks, hopefully you'll like my first chapter, which I'm working on at the moment. It should be up soon
Peace:P
Becka
