Fourtris fanfiction

Fourtris moment

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Everyone had improved a lot. Well almost everyone, that one girl, still swooning over Tobias. 'Stupid Tara' I thought bitterly. Tara was hanging out with a random guy, Tobias and I walked over. 'Better get it over with' I thought. "Keep tension here." He muttered to her, pointing at her stomach. My heart lurched and I bit my lip, I could feel her gaze on me, her eyes shining triumphantly as she made a face. She was blushing, I could see it in the corner of my eye 'don't kill her. Don't kill her!' I told myself over and over again, trying to calm down. "Hello? Keep tension in your stomach! Not your face! You look like you ate a rotten lemon" Tobias snapped at her and I couldn't help laughing out loud. Tara fake laughed, trying to fit in.

I turned back to the guy, I think his name was Adam or something "You need to focus on the place you want the knife to hit. Not the knife itself, the rest will come naturally". I went over, helping people fix up their posture.

Until finally I was with Dan, "Couldn't resist me aye?" He asked.

"No. However you should be looking at the target and not me, unless you are aiming at me, but then you need to actually turn to me." I pointed out formerly. Tobias and I walked back to the middle of the group, watching everyone again. "That girl likes you" I muttered to him, eyeing Tara. "Well too bad, since I'm all yours" he kissed me gently.

Tobias snatched a piece of my Dauntless cake, "Hey! You have your own!" I said, taking the advantage and snatching one of his.

Zeke laughed, "Careful Tris, it'll go straight to your thighs."

"Well then I'd have some curves!" I shot back. I didn't gain weight easily, and now I was running around and training more I gained weight through muscles, not fat.

Christina laughed, "Actually you're more curvy then you were before. Not to be perverish or anything." She smiled wickedly. 'I will not blush. I will not bl- crap. I blushed. Stupid abnegation!' I muttered angrily to myself. It was true enough though, now I actually had a curvier feminine look, and the muscles helped.

"Stop gawking at me!" I slapped Tobias's arm.

"I was just trying to see the difference..." He muttered. I slapped him again, then leaned in and kissed him. Christina started gagging. "Little stiff! That was MY job!" I joked at her. "Yeah. It WAS your job. Mine now!" She laughed. "Well I hope you don't mind me doing this..." Tobias said, leaning in, forcing me down so I was lying down on the bench, he started kissing me softly. Zeke was standing up looking over the table to get a better view, Tobias and I were still laying on each other, making out.

"Okay guys. That's a good enough po- OKAY STOP MAKING OUT!!!" She screamed at us, we jumped apart and then everyone slowly started to look at Christina. The hall was silent.

"Sorry!" A little girl squeaked, sitting next to a boy with lipstick smudges in him, they had obviously been kissing.

"N-no not, not you..." Christina said hastily, looking pretty embarrassed. Everyone turned around and started talking again.

After a while Zeke said "Well aren't you glad no one saw that?" He smirked at us. "It's a sign from the heavens that you shouldn't split us up!" Tobias said dramatically to Christina. Everyone laughed.

"Anyone want to get a tattoo?" I asked, "yeah sure." They said back.

So after dinner/dessert we walked over to the tattoo place. "What kind of design would you like?" The guy asked me.

"I would like seven magpies, all in different positions. And under them write 'One for sorrow. Two for mirth. Three for a marriage and four for a birth. Five for silver, six for gold. And seven for a secret that's never been told' I would like that on my lower back. Not my butt!" I replied looking hastily at Tobias who was eyeing me.

"Mysterious. I like that" the man said. I lifted up my shirt slightly, feeling the familiar burn across my skin.

"Why did you get it?" Tobias asked when it was over.

"To remind you how to count. And it's a nursery rhyme, you count the magpies up." I said.

Tobias turned to the man, "I would like Tris's name running around my ring finger, like a wedding ring." Tobias smiled. The man was shocked slightly, shrugged and started putting the tattoo on. "And I would like one of Tobias around my ring finger too..." I said quietly. The man laughed and put his name around my finger, just like Tobias's.

We walked out the door, holding hands, our ring fingers entwined against each other. "I like the tattoos." I said.

"I like you, and the tattoos." He replied.

"And cake?" I asked innocently. "Especially the cake" he smirked, pulling me in closer to him.

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