•Sin#4•

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So here we go again!
Well at least it's not grammar this time

Nope it's worse

Today's sin is
constant
description.

Not going to lie it's one is the worse sins and one of the most annoying ones.

Description and detail is one of the best things in writhing it makes it more interesting to read but constant description is another thing.

Example:
Melody walked into the the classroom late the teacher with dark green eyes and sandy blonde hair scolded her before going back to writing on the chalk board and she proceeded to grumpily walk to her seat.

Guys seriously if the disruption isn't needed or has really any further use then it shouldn't be there.

And if it's in first person or that characters point of view you should NEVER describe your character if it's unneeded like their eye colour unless it's relevant.

So if you do this just don't.

Just stop now or rewrite everything and fix this.

Well that's all for now!

Stay awesome bros!

*poof!*

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