Chapter 1

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The Promise is all about two young lover's who promised that they will stay forever and they will have kid's. And no one can break them apart. But someone in their past will come back and their parents were keeping them apart because it is a big mistake... Read this story to know why.... =)

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By:Blinkwriter

"The Promise Characters"

Joan Brook- the lead character

Jason Woods- the savior of Joan

Laney Rigby- Joan's bestfriend

Dereck Marty- friend of Dylan

Daphne Edwards- the other woman

Dylan Glover- ex boyfriend of Joan

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Joan's P.O.V

It is my firstday at school. I'm at first year college right now. And BTW, my name is Joan Brook an average height woman with a white complexion and a dark wavy hair. I took a bath, ate my breakfast and kissed goodbye to my mom. I was walking on the streets to school. Of course I don't want to be late for my first day.

 I reached my school and went to my room I sat on the front row so no one would disturb me. I sat there waiting for our professor to come. While waiting, someone sat  beside me. At first I didnt care who it was. I was still reading. But I can see that he is staring at me..

 I looked at him to see who is he.. Well he's cute and charming but I just wonder. Why would he stare at me? Im not that attractive that when guys sees me their gonna drool out. Well, Maybe I got a dirt on my face? I got my handkerchief  and wipe my face. But I still continued reading.

I can sense that he is still staring at me, I was going to approach him but our professor went in. Whooo! thanks Professor (I said in my mind).. So everybody hurried back to their seats. Since it is the first day of school our professors didn't had their lessons. So what we did was to have a little chitchat with our new classmates.

 I was talking to Laney, My super bestfriend since middle school. She has the same height with mine, white complexion and a reddish straight hair. We talked about everything and how we spent our time during the summer. 

 It is time to go home....Before, when me and laney was still in middle school, we always go home late because we chatted all afternoon. But we decided to go home early. We walked on the sidewalks, as we walk we talk.

Laney, you know. someone in our class is staring at me while I'm reading my book.*I said

Oh, maybe she likes the book you're reading?? *she asked excitedly

Actually Laney, he is a guy... *I exclaimed

OH MY GOSH! He is staring at you!? Is he cute? Maybe he likes you!! *she asked continuously

Oh come on.. One question at a time please.... *I said

So, Is he cute?? *she said curiously

Well,He's cute and charming though.. *I said

Does he like you?! *she said

Oh for God sake, No!! *I shouted

Ok fine. Joan, I have to go now. Goodbye! *she said while waving her hand

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