Rupunzil with a twist

Chapte

Once upon a time there was a lady.
The Queen.
She was very happy because this Queen was due to have a baby.
Her husband.
The king.
Set up the baby's room it was beautiful and there was crown wall paper. 
Any way little did they know there was  a kidnapper who was lurking about in the bushes outside the kingdom.
One night the Queen announced that she was about to have her baby. "It's coming the baby is coming."
EIGHT HOURS LATER..
There they were holding the little princess.
Rupunzel they called her.
They lay her in the cradle and sang her to sleep they wer-
Wait a second sorry to interrupt but you forgot to describe what the baby looked like.
Ugh I was getting to that.
Well chop chop.
Anyway the baby had long ginger hair that was magic it's gingerness attracted the sun. And that is when the magic happens you make a wish and
Wait a second I watched the movie and Rapunzil clearly has blonde hair you are getting every thing wrong.
First of all you should go back and look at the cover it says Rapunzil with a twist so it's obviously different and second of all quite interrupting me.
Back to the story.
The wind blew and the trees whistled as the kidnapper came into the princesses room.
"Hello little princess I'm   rose or you should call me mum" she whispered.
Rose snatched the baby and before they could save her off she went on her horse with Rapunzil. They rode off to a castle. She took the baby in and
Hold on don't worry this is important you did not say what colour the castle is man you and your explaining it's just outrageous
Ok fine the castle was red and black evil like Rose.
Ok where was I that's right she took her in and lay her in her new cradle
"now young one I will use your hair to make me young and beautiful forever"