Okay, I said Michael Jackson Fanfic but I will cut some slack. I really loved it, it waas was really I mean really good. The thing is, try not to go too overboard, sometimes your readers can get lost to what you're trying to say.
I know you have that problem of yours that you have an idea in your head and you want to write anything and everything down but sometimes slow down. I need you to update the second chapter though, you really need to.
Keep Writing & Keep Moonwalking
~Michael
YOU ARE READING
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Random"Michael why haven'tyou answered my calls?" "I was reading on Wattpad, leave me alone."
