State Of Shock

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by ShannonLetoIsBae

 This seems very interesting. You gotta update though. Here is what I think of the book State Of Shock, its a very nice book but can we be a little more realistic by realistic I mean more details. Like to desribe what Jason's face looked like: "Jason's eyebrows pulled together, he only does that when something is wrong." Something that makes Jason's well doings be more suspicious.

Anyways other than that you got to update like really, Dec 17. Thats last year gurl, no like I not kidding you gotta update, I can't wait to see whats next!

Keep writing & Moonwalking!

~Michael

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