Authors note:
Sooooo.... how are you guys? Heh...
Ok, I'm not going to apologise and just come out with it.
This story is shit.
Re-reading through my work has given me that insight and is discouraging me from continuing. If you enjoyed this story then I'm real sorry but I don't have the heart to continue writing this.
Originally, I had only planned to write another chapter to finish the story off but that didn't really work out. You see, in the end, the main character might have died so that team 7 knew true sacrifice and so I wouldn't taint the Naruto world with my shitty words.
I actually really enjoyed writing this book but, like all my other books, there are so many plot holes, grammatical errors and spelling mistakes that I can barely even look at this.
For starters, I've forgotten to include Tetsuya in the recent chapters of this book and I've missed parts of the plot. I could also be found guilty of turning Misuzu into a Mary Sue. The other glaring issue that I can think of right now is the fact that my protagonist has fell right out of character. *cringe* Although, this is probably due to my cruel personality and the fact that I can't physically write my character off as a nice person because I'm generally just... well, an ass-hole.
On a brighter note, I may rewrite this book *yay for hope!*.
Also, here's the summary of what chapter 15 would have been like:
- Misuzu came up with a plan so that they could pass the test
- the original team 7 would hide in the trees until Kakashi was distracted enough so they could grab the bells and pass the test
- the plan was in action and Misuzu decided to instead, piss Kakashi off for a distraction and took it way too far. Kakashi starts attacking her for real
-whilst that happens O.T.7 (Original. Team. 7) manage to get the bells (yep, somehow it works)
- Naruto turns around to show Misuzu, grinning to himself,only to find her struck in the chest with chidori.
-Kakashi is horrified, Sakura screams like the pink-haired banshee she is, Sasuke looks to the poor ground and glares at it like its the grounds fault it happened and Naruto starts trembling before screaming 'monster' to Kakashi.
- they sadly still pass the test because of their teamwork and learn the painful truth about being a ninja as they visit the ninja memorial thing and strive to grow stronger to avoid this happening again.
-Misuzu is taken to hospital just in case she survives.
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Yep, that's how it would have ended. If i had decided to make a book two, Misuzu would have lived, if not, she'd die. Rather morbid, eh?
Also, in case I do decide to rewrite this story, please don't use my ideas. It's the one thing that makes my story unique.
See ya (maybe)
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