Okay, first chapter, tell me what you think!!!!!!!! Sorry i meant to put a picture of brittany and the dress but it was disagreeing with me!!!!
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Brittany
Age: 16
Looks Like: jet black hair, purple eyes, tall for her age
Hobbies: Reading, writing, drawing, taking pictures and playing guitar
Likes: all flowers, any book, almost all movies/ TV shows, and all animals.
Dislikes: loud noises, most people, bugs, and closed spaces.
Something else: hasn’t talked since going to the orphanage, half vampire, powers are make her or others practically human, read minds, and control weather
I was looking out the window, as always and saw a sleek black car and silver Volvo drive into the parking lot. Great, another baby is going to get adopted. I thought. I started listening to their thoughts. I hate humans. I can’t believe Esme is doing this. I wish I could at least stay home with Jasper. One, named Rosalie, said. It’s a good thing that I’m not human maybe I’ll be adopted. I thought hopefully, but what was the use no one wants a 16 year old that doesn’t talk. I am so excited, I can’t believe Carlisle is letting me get a human. The mom, Esme, thought. I smiled, whoever she picked was going to a good home. Someone was practically screaming vampire in their head. I sighed, if only they adopted me then, I would have someone who knew what I was going through. Then, 9 people got out of the car. They walked into the building. “Everyone ages 10-17, to the lobby, please.” The owner, Angela, said over the intercom. I got up and walked downstairs. The group was looking at the kids that were there first. I stood in the back, reading everyone’s thoughts.
Carlisle was thinking about Esme and her happiness and some Jasper they left at home. Esme was thinking of which child to take home and raise as her own. Rosalie was thinking of how to change everyone’s mind. Emmet was thinking of how to get everyone to get a boy. Edward was thinking of Bella and Renesmee, while Bella was thinking of Renesmee and Edward. Renesmee was thinking of someone named Jake. Alice was thinking of Jasper. I saw that Alice could see the future, and Edward could read minds. I opened my mind, as not to upset him. I started to think about random thinks and how my hair looks, trying to repel them. Edward looked at me and whispered to Esme. I shut off my mind again. Oh great! They all turned to me and I stared into space. They came over. “What’s your name?” Esme said in a sweet, motherly voice. “She doesn’t talk, ever. She never has, since she got here. You can try if you want, but she doesn’t talk.” Mrs. Marks. She walked away and everyone stared at me. I stared back at them all.
“Can we have her?” Alice asked Mrs. Marks. She nodded and led them into a room while Renesmee and I went up stairs to pack my stuff. It took about 5 minutes. When we were done, we went down stairs. Everyone was waiting. They walked out to the black car and silver Volvo. When they got there, Emmet out the bag in the back. She got in the back and Emmet, Rosalie and Alice squeezed in beside me. I was blocking Edward and listening to everyone. Almost everyone was thinking the same thing. Why can’t she talk? Except Edward, he was thinking about why he couldn’t read my thoughts. “Edward, could you see what she is thinking?” Carlisle said really fast thinking that I couldn’t understand or hear, but I did. “No she’s drawing a blank for me.” Edward said just as fast. It seemed that he couldn’t read Bella either, so it didn’t shock them much. I could read Bella fine. I wonder why Edward can’t read her. Oh well, I think she’s and Nessie will be great friends. She thought staring at Nessie.