Jail (yogscast fanfiction)

Chapter 4

Chapter 4

I went over to the girl. "Um, hi I'm tori, who are you?" I ask. She looks up. I like her already! Mysterious looking. "Oh hi, I'm Mally" she replied. Her voice seemed....aggressive, I liked it! "Do you wanna help me get revenge on my enemies?" I ask. We were in the courtyard. "Who?" She asked her eyes lighting up at the word 'revenge', but her eyes still had that angry fire in it. I pointed to the yogsbarf.....oops I mean yogscast (love yogscast btw!!) she gasped "why them? They are like famous!" She said

"They killed my father" I say grimly. I loved my father he gaught me the killer ways and that good people are bad and to not trust them. "Who?" She asked "Israphel" I say. She looks at me "you don't look like him." She replies "I have my moms features, but my dad's personality. Anyway, why are you in here?" I ask

"Oh well I killed people, in public, and not to brag but I lead a three day car chase!" She said. " Mally madisoy (XD hope you don't mind)? The one from the news? You were like the most wanted!" I exclaim. "Oh, btw this his faith and rain, my friends" I say, pointing to them. Her eyes get hard again. "Oh, hi" she spits. (I want to make her only like tori is that ok?) "um, guys this is mally." I say, a little confused.

"Is that tori?" I hear an all to familiar voice behind me calls. My blood boils.

Oh boy new characters! I hope you don't mind that I made up your character's last name and made her only like tori. Anyway guys hop you liked!

Peace out Enders

-Rain