The Jayfeather Book

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This chapter is dedicated to Alliaoxox for being a hilarious human being I am glad to have known.
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Hmm. I've usually wondered how the story would have changed if Jayfeather's features were different. Here I'll write a few paragraphs with these different features. Keep in mind, I don't want to spoil books featuring Jayfeather to ones who haven't read all of them, so the paragraphs will not include anything besides Jayfeather and 1-3 other characters.

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Hmm. What if Jayfeather had green eyes?
-Thought: I don't think much would change-

Jayfeather reluctantly padded out of the medicine den. His ears dropped low and he stared down at his paws while walking towards the entrance of camp. Jayfeather tripped over a cat.
"Get out of my way, Icefeather!" He hissed after recovering from his fall.
The she-cat shrugged after seeing his irritated emerald green eyes that shone a lime color in the sunlight. Such a shame he won't ever see his eyes' true color. Icefeather thought.

Yea, not much would change if Jayfeather's eyes were green. Comment if you think something bigger will change if his eyes were green.
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Hmm. What if Jayfeather was never blind?
-Thought: Big change.-

Jayfeather set off to find Icefeather. He had something to tell her. Searching through the dens, his gaze finally met hers. Thankfully, he lightly padded to the white she-cat. Jayfeather blindly walked to Icefeather, keeping his eyes locked with hers. This was only until a small gray dot caught his attention. Abruptly stopping, he looked down at the dot. It was a pebble. Thank StarClan he noticed it when he did. He saw Icefeather smiling at Jayfeather after he walked over the pebble and to her.
"I was going to tell you of my vision StarClan sent me last night," Jayfeather told his mentor. He waved his tail towards the forest, signaling for her to follow him there.

I wish he wasn't blind...
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Hmm. What else could happen if Jayfeather wasn't blind?
-Thought: You're in for a treat- (Long)
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"From this moment on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Jaypaw. Icefeather will be your mentor. I hope she will pass her courage, strength and agility down to you," Firestar said. Jaypaw's eyes gleamed as he glanced up at his leader.
**time pass**
"I, Firestar, leader of ThunderClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn.
"Jaypaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?" Firestar paused waiting to hear his response.
Jaypaw's voice came out in a purr, "I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Jaypaw, from this moment you will be known as Jayfeather. StarClan honors your honesty and bravery, and we welcome you as a full warrior of ThunderClan.

JAYFEATHER JAYFEATHER JAYFEATHER!
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A/N
I wanted to post a chapter today, but I am getting bored of writing, (OMG RACHEL HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE?!) so I'm going to stop the chapter here. Please join the Fan Club and vote for this chapter, for I am waiting for you in the next chapter. I do like the chapter itself and I plan on writing more of the "Hmm. What if-"s. Thus, comment here some ideas! Ok, bye!