Reading Old Stories

Kingdom of the Dragons Part 3

Lauren, Bianca, the king, Daniel and the two guards rushed outside to find thousands of monsters and goblins. (Wait why did they need to go outside? It said in the last chapter that the monsters came inside-never mind) All three of them got right to battle. (Yes. They got right to battle) Lauren and Bianca were shooting spells at anything that moved ( costing the lives of a few of the king's soldiers)(Oh yeah? I can do parentheses too! Also, you terrible humans-witches? Are they still human? I don't know... or care) and Daniel was stabbing things with his sword. He slid under a troll and got it's back. Lauren projected a shield to protect the good guys (The good guys? How old was I when I wrote this?) from the falling troll.the (Put a space after the period!)  fight went on for hours and there was still no clear winner.

Then she saw her on the other side of the field. (Saw who-oh Bianca) Bianca was up against the dark skeleton. (Not the dark skeleton with no capital letters even though it's obviously a proper noun. OH THE HUMANITY) 

Light came out of her body and wiped out all of the monsters. (No, I never explain this) Lauren saw Menacca running into the woods. Alexis fell onto the ground and was unconscious. The king came to the four of them.

"You were right. I will come with you on your quest to rescue my daughter."(Such dialogue)

"It wasn't hard to guesss" he said." She's the only one in the kingdom that can tame the dragon. "(Wat)

Lauren noticed her uncomfortableness (Not a word) and said" let's head to sleep. We can continue to the prison in the morning."(What prison? ) All of them covered themselves with leaves (Of course) and tried to fall asleep.

Daniel woke up to a scream as he saw Jacob's two guards were gagged. They fell over and a man stood in front of Daniel. He didn't seem to know that anyone was awake. He killed one of the guards (rip) and moved on to Bianca. Daniel brought his leg out from under the man and tripped him. The man fell onto Lauren, waking her up. (*laughs*)

Lauren stood up and hit the man on the head with her elbow. (*laughing even more* What a weird fighting tactic! Just hit him on the head with your elbow! This lady can do magic and she's just hitting him in the head with her elbow. WHAT ARE YOU?!)