Louis Tomlinson BSM, DDM

Slapped, BSM

Louis Tomlinson
Y/N is age 7.
Bsm.

You were so excited to show your brother the 100% you earned on a spelling test, one that Louis initially stayed up all night helping you study for.

Hearing the swift rattle of the door knob you race down the stairs to greet your brother, expecting to be smothered in kisses from your recent achievement.

You start yelling for his attention, "Louis! Look! I got-"

"Y/N I can't talk right now. Go upstairs." Louis says sternly. If only you listened to his command...

"But I want to show you something! Look-" Louis turns around and starts to walk away, ignoring your numerous pleas for him to look.

You proceed to ask him a thousand more times until your own brother decides he has had enough.

"That's it, Y/N! Go in the corner and think about your actions!" Louis screams at you, bending down to your level and picking you up, placing you in the notorious "Time Out Chair."

Still in your hand was the test, with the gleaming 100% at the top that was starting to fade from the lack of encouragement and congratulations you were receiving. A single tear rolled down your cheek, but your perseverance was not going away easily, not without a fight.

You climbed off of the time out chair and ran into the kitchen where Louis sat on his computer.

You gripped the test with an iron fist, and marched up to your brother.

"Louis! Look! Look at my-"

Pain.

Pain was all you felt. Like an epedemic the physical pain spread throughout your cheek, but then the emotional pain spread as well.

"How could you!" You scream, throwing the test to the ground and running up into your room.

Louis was in shock at what he had done. He looked down and picked up the test, "Oh, she got a 100!" Louis gleamed with happiness, but then realization settled in- he slapped his sister.

"Oh no" Louis yelped and sprinted to Y/N's room. He slammed the door open and jumped into her bed, seeing her tear stained cheeks.

"Go away..." You murmur with your face in the pillow.

"Y/N I'm so sorry. You probably will never forgive me, and that's okay. Please know I love you so much. More than the moon and back, and I would and I will do anything for you, anything you need or want. I'm so sorry, sweetheart. I should've listened to you. I'm so sorry..." Louis says, lifting your chin to look into your beautiful eyes,

"It's okay. I'll try to forgive you, but I don't think I will be able to forget." You mumble, the tears starting to stop.

Louis whispers, "I love you so much, Y/N. I don't know what I would do without you. And wonderful job on your test! I'm so proud of you, you cute little smarty pants!" As your brother whispered this he reached over and pinched your cheeks, in a cute brotherly way.

"I love you too, Louis." You whisper.

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Okay I feel like this was a bad ending bc Y/N forgived Louis pretty quickly but i didn't know what to do.

How do you like this new writing style? I'm trying to be sophisticated.

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