Captured (ImmortalFox) ((Under heavy editing))

Heavenly giggle

Sitting in Taco Bell Aleksandr looked over the few people sitting down and eating their meals. It was 3am so Aleksandr didn't expect there to be many people out and about, just a few stoners who were dying for some munchies and some college students who looked like they were on their last legs, it was close to exam season. The reason Aleksandr was sitting in Taco bell, he liked people watching people fascinated him, in all the wrong ways all these people would be so easy to kill... Who would expect a college drop out to be a killer.

You see in the past two months there has been a killer going around Colorado, kidnapping and murdering men in their early to mid-twenties going by the name 'Immortal'. Aleksandr wishes he'd chosen a better name, but it seemed like a good idea when with his last victim, who was an up and coming cop he put a note on his body for when the police finally found him because Aleksandr always wants the victims to be found, why wouldn't he? He makes art of these disgusting people and art deserve to be seen. Well any way the note said 'Hi boys, enjoy this piece of art- Immortal' And ever since then the police and the newspaper has been calling him Immortal, he'd only used it to taunt the police and to tell them that they will never find him because hell the police still didn't know what he looked like and they didn't have a sharp of evidence to start looking for the murderer.

When the clock hit 4am Aleksandr started to get bored of people watching and was about to get up and head over to his car and home but something stopped him. It was a man's giggle, and it was heavenly, it caught his attention right away and when he looked for the source of the giggle he saw a Latino man with a blond guy in a beanie next to him. It was the Latino making the beautiful sound and just from that laugh Aleksandr knew that the Latino had to be his next victim, it would be a crying shame if he wasn't.

Aleksandr watched the Latino mess around with the blond-haired guy with a grin on his face if anyone looked over at him they'd think he was a maniac, which he is. Aleksandr listened to the conversation the two were having, and he learnt that the Latino's name was Eddie and the blond was called Seamus but really Aleksandr couldn't care less about the blond.
Eddie was loud and obnoxious and Aleksandr could tell that the blond was having a hard time trying to calm Eddie down.
Aleksandr decided to leave when more friends of theirs walked in a took a seat around the table.

Whilst Aleksandr was leaving he had a massive grin on his face, and again he must look like such a creep because who smiles at 4am? But he hadn't had a victim in over two months and what a perfect victim to have, he'd never killed a Latino before and he was excited for Eddie to be his first one.

Aleksandr was walking to his car and thinking about what the best way of kidnapping Eddie would be, it's not like his other victims who he usually meets in clubs and just slips something in their drinks. He was going to have to do some stalking which had never interested Aleksandr before, too much effort for disgusting pigs but he was willing to make the extra effort for Eddie, Aleksandr hopes that Eddie will apricate that.

Aleksandr decided that he would wait in his car until the blond whose name he had forgotten already and Eddie, he was going to follow them in his car and hope that they lead Aleksandr to Eddie's house because that would take a lot of effort of his shoulders if they would do that. But Aleksandr started to get annoyed when it was taking them so long to leave the place, why couldn't they just shut the fuck up and get a move on, isn't it rude when Aleksandr is ready to make some art and the world just decides that he has to be patient. Aleksandr hates having to be patient.

After what seemed liked forever Eddie and his group of friends finally left the restaurant and Eddie waved by to three of his friend leaving him alone with the blond again, it seemed like Eddie was going to drop the blond off before driving himself home. The blond was starting to annoy Aleksandr couldn't he just already leave so Aleksandr can get to the exciting part.

As Aleksandr is following the car he is reminded of why he had never been interested in stalking, it's just a waste of time and effort and it is so boring! How can some people find this fun? It's the most tedious thing Aleksandr has ever done and all this for just one man, he could just go to a club and pick up some slut but no he has to have this one guy. God Aleksandr hopes that Eddie is worth all the hassle he is having to go through.

After following them for what seemed forever Eddies car finally stopped in front of a nice house and the blond jumped out, Aleksandr made sure to keep his distance so he couldn't hear what Eddie and the blond where talking about but to be honest he didn't really care about what they are talking about and again they seemed to talk forever and Aleksandr was thinking about maybe just killing the blond so Eddie would start moving!

When Eddie finally pulled away Aleksandr made sure to stay back so he didn't seem suspicious and to follow Eddie a few cars back, it took what seemed hours for Eddie to park outside his house and at this point Aleksandr was agitated but he now knew where Eddie lived and he could start planning out how he is going to get Eddie and Aleksandr pulled away smiling, knowing that this is going to be one of this best kills.

(Yo guys! It's Kitteh in 2016! I'm finally getting around to editing this piece of trash so it reads less like 2014 Kitteh who clearly didn't know how to write to save her life man I was cringing when I was having to read through this to get the context of the chapter!

So yeah I hope that you like the edited version of this chapter because I sure as hell do! And I'll be doing this with all the other chapters as well, I still don't know if I'm going to finish this fanfic because who the hell still ships ImmortalFox? And the creatures hub is dead but I don't know right.

Also I've changed the title of this chapter from Whose giggle is that? Because one I spelt whose wrong and it just didn't seem to flow like I wanted it too so I've changed it too heavenly giggle.

Well enjoy reading this edited version!

-Kitteh!)