Title: Tyler's Gem
Author: TwinziHasan
Summary/Description:
Highest ranking in Teen Fiction #1
Completed and slowly editing
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"Dude what's your problem?" I asked when everyone was out of sight. It's as if I flipped a switch because the playful Tyler was gone. Instead, serious Tyler was back and looked very angry. What did do this time?
"My problem is that you attract so much attention.
l blinked once.
"My problem is that you're so damn naive you don't notice everyone looking at you."
l held in my breath as he pushed me against the wall.
"My problem is that every guy out there was watching you."
l felt my heart beat even faster as his angry face came closer and laid his forehead onto mine.
"My problem is that no one can take a damn hint." He growled.
l opened mouth to say something but he spoke once again.
"My problem is that you don't see it."
"See what?" I breathed out quietly.
"That you're damn mine and only mine." He growled out before smashing his lips onto mine.
She was broken
So she moved away
Until one day
she returned
Having to face the person who hurt her
Making her past rise from the ground once more
Making Tyler's feelings return once again
Making her trapped in his presence
And making her his Gem
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When you hold something dear to your heart, you try to treasure it as if it was gold. For it is too valuable to loose. And when you protect it with all your might, it then becomes your treasure.
Your gem.
Status: Completed
# of Parts: 65
My Opinion On The Story:
Let's just say, THAT WAS A LONG AWAITED EPILOGUE. I just loved how everything seemed to be planned out since the beginning, from the random plot twisters, like the parents and the siblings to some other stuff that you have to read the book to find out! Something I thought this book could improve on was not adding in unnecessary long paragraphs and focus on the story's main conflict. I just found that I skipped at lot of those paragraphs because I wanted to know more about the story; Tyler's Gem, rather than what Crystal's favorite song was. Anyways, I found this book really refreshing because I haven't read Teen Fiction in a long ass time and it was about time I read one of them "Bad Boy"/"Bully" type books.
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