P.O.Vs.
POINT OF VIEW.
MEANING PERCEPTIVE VIEW OF OTHERS.
THAT DOES NOT MEAN YOU HAVE TO INCLUDE ERRRRRBODY AND DEY MAMA.
Seriously.
They've even got the neighbor's point of view of the situation:
I watched as the two teenagers argued in front of my lawn.
Oh.
My.
God.
This has got to stop. Characters that actually make a big impact on the story plot should have POVs.
Not your cat.
That's just downright unnatural.
Forreal.
Who's with me?
Next.
NICE, BEAUTIFUL, ROCK HARD ABS.
Example:
I couldn't stop staring at his muscular build. His rock hard abs. Astagfirullah. I lowered my gaze.
What? First of all that's Ow'rah (parts you're supposed to cover) for him. Bellybutton to knees. So homie, how in God's name do you know he got abs? Got special sight that you can see through clothes?
Did ya feel 'em to know they're rock hard? Questions, questions.
I mean, does the guy walk around without a shirt? It's the 21st century, we're wayyyyy past the invention of clothing.
What if, are you ready for this one?
What if, some girls actually like lanky guys or just normal guys?
You know, guys that are just not fat not skinny.
Is that forbidden? *whispers* Does it go against girl code?
Yeah, yeah, I think it does, Joe.
What...
Why'd I just type that?
Who's Joe?
I'm going insane.
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