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So yes there is going to be a sequel to this. It will be called Two Knights. I am working on it now.
The first chapter of Two Knights is up now. I really could use some ideas 💡 for it. All I have is a hundred ways for Ezra to steal Luke's lightsaber. Funny 😂 but not really something I should write more than a couple chapters on.

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Guest chapter 9 . Oct 29, 2016
I look forward to which is to come.
Here are ideas;

Ezra; Look. I know you're ticked about me using your name to cover my identity.
(Jabba roars out)
C-3P0: He says 'You made me look ridiculous'.
Ezra; You're good with doing it yourself, Mr Arrogant Twit who Fell for Count Dooku's fib.
(Jabba roars out)
C-3P0: He says 'I had enough of your mockery'. He does.
Ezra; I could tell by his angry face. Would you Hutts just let it go?
(Jabba roars out)
C-3P0: He says 'Enough... DIE'!
Ezra; Typical Hutt.
Luke: Jabba. If you do this, you'd condemn your people to destrucion. Without the Jedi, the Empire would destroy you all.
(Jabba roars)
C-3P0: He accused you Jedi of betraying him by letting the Empire roam.

Hera; A rancor.
Ezra: Oh, terrific.

Boba Fett; One of you Jedi slew my dad.
Ezra; You lie.
Boba Fett; You lie. You Jedi slew my dad.
Kanan; Your dad was a betrayer to Mandolore who helped the Sith start the Clone-Wars. His actions led to the Empire. MAce had to do it to rescue the Republic.
Boba Fett: Mace murdered my dad. He ruined my life. But Darth Vader avenged my dad.

Sabine: Boba Fett.
Boba Fett; I know you too. You;re from Death Watch.

Sabine and Boba Fett can fight.

Sabine and Boba Fett can use flamethrowers, rocket-launchers, laser-pistols, and laser-rifle.s

Boba Fett: These lightsabres. Got them from Jedi I slew.
Sabioen: Good thing I got one too. A darksabre. Claimed from the Jedi-Temple during the Old Republic by an ancestor. I own it.
(they sword-fight)

Sabine would beat Boba. But she refuses to murder coz she knows revenge would stain the soul. She turns to leave. Boba prepares to use his laser-pistol from behind... only to fail due to Han accidently damaging his jets with a halberd.

Luike; You got a Jedi's lightsabre.
Sabien: I..
Luke: You deserve it. You got the heart of a Jedi. You risked your own life to rescue Ezra and I. And you coulda slain Boba Fett... but you chose to spare him.
Sabien: I know better. Revenge stains the soul. It's how Boba Fett began.
Luke; You proved Jedi-based in a way.
Kanan: Hmmm.

Sabine: Anythign wrong with a girl savign you?
Ezra; Uh-uh... My Amazon!
(they kiss)
(Luke smirks for the two)

Sabine can do the helet thign when Yoda dies.

Luke: Rest well, Yoda. You earned it.
Ahsoka: Yeah. He did. Many Jedi fell. Many... even Mace... almost grew close to becomign Sith. But Yoda remmebred which it meant to be a Jedi.

Ahsoka: I had to go into hiding.

Ahsoka can support Luke's belief in bringing Anakin back. So can Ezra. And Sabine.

Kanan: He;'s a monster.
Ahsoka; You speak as if you were Count Dooku. HE was a Jedi. As was Krell. And Barris Offe. If you act on revenge, your soul would be tainted.

Guest chapter 8 . Oct 24, 2016
I look forward to how the Ghost Crew help. I can picture comedy such as Ezra and Sabine acting as strangers especially if they deny Jabba when he suspects he knows Ezra from somewhere,

heser of my WA chapter 1 . Sep 18, 2016
Continue to. do will

jedijeff chapter 8 . Aug 25, 2016
hoping to see more soon

Unknown user chapter 2 . Aug 16, 2016
You spelled "Twi'lek" wrong. (I'll fix this eventually)

mmat chapter 8 . Jul 12, 2016
So Ketsu the one for Luke will she stay around.

mmat chapter 7 . Jul 9, 2016
Will you bring a love interest for Luke in this story?

Pink ranger 13 chapter 7 . Jul 9, 2016
It's a great story

Guest chapter 5 . Jul 6, 2016
Luke better fight Vader alone. Because its a father son battle

andrewjameswilliams chapter 4 . Jul 3, 2016
Nice updates. It will be interesting to see how Luke's test goes and how they go about rescuing Han from Jabba The Hutt.

A thought they could do something like what happened in canon. Leia goes in as before to 'claim' the bounty on Chewbacca but this time Sabine - after repainting her armour for disguise purposes - goes along as the bounty hunters Mandalorian partner. Of course when Leia gets impatient and gets herself captured by Jabba Sabine slips out, but not before planting trackers and explosives on Jabba's sail barge as it could be well known that the Hutt likes to dispose of prisoners at the Pit of Carkoon.

The trackers let them follow in the Phantom and when the sail barge is far enough from Jabba's Palace to not be able to get easy reinforcements they detonate the explosives disabling the barge's repulsor drives and primary power - so the heavy lasers won't work. Then Luke, Ezra and Kanan board the barge, rescue Leia and Han before dealing with Jabba and his minions through as Anakin called it aggressive negotiations.

andrewjameswilliams chapter 2 . Jun 23, 2016
Not bad.

Luke is being a little juvenile assuming that Ezra is still a padawan just because he himself is still a padawan. At least until the Force Ghost of Obi-Wan told him otherwise. Other than that a good second chapter.

One thing please try and put in line breaks or something when you change locations as where you go from the cockpit or common room of the Ghost to the room where Luke meets Obi-Wan is a little jarring and unexpected without a break to indicate the scene change.

andrewjameswilliams chapter 1 . Jun 22, 2016
Interesting start. Luke and Ezra together would make one hell of a team, especially as they are closely matched in power levels though Ezra is a lot more world wise than Luke generally is.

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