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Yo,

So, this story needs some major editing because my writing from a year ago is not as good as my writing now. So I will be going through and editing, changing, and rewriting things. I hope you guys will like the new version of this story better than the older.

Sincerely,

Author

Edited: 06/17/18

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I stumbled through the woods loudly and painfully. I should've just stayed away from everyone. I was dangerous, it was only natural for people to be scared and confused.

As I stumbled around like a blind woman I spotted a gap in the trees. Excitement and relief bubbled up inside me. This gap in the trees could lead to a road and that road could lead to a village!

I tore past bushes and trees, tripping over roots and my own feet. As I approached my destination it began to rain—lightly at first, until it fell like rocks from the sky.

The sky is crying, I thought

I suddenly cried out in pain as I tripped over a rock jutting out of the ground. I tumbled down, landing on my arm. I hissed in pain and pushed myself onto my back. My vision blurred with tears. I could feel the blood seeping through the bandages a.k.a pieces of my shirt.
I had lost too much blood, I knew that. What I didn't know is if I was going to bleed out and die.

And yet, I pushed myself to the very limits again. With a groan I got to my feet and—using the trees for support—pushed myself out onto a  wet, gravelly road.

I smiled widely with relief. I looked to my left and then to my right where I saw the shapes of people.

Maybe they can help me, I thought.

"Itachi, who's that?" I heard a voice say.

"It appears to be a... a girl," Another voice said. This voice was soothing and clear, unlike the previous one which was loud and sort of obnoxious.

I tried to take a step towards the voices but my knees gave out and I hit the ground like my Uncle Greg on Christmas Morning when his hangover hits him.

"Oh god! Get the medical gear out!" A high pitched voice squeaked.

The edges of my vision became blurry and the last thing I saw before the darkness came over, was four figures running towards me.

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I love Itachi so much so I just had to write a fan fic about him!

This fan fiction will start out as you being a kid but don't worry things will move quickly!

I hope you enjoyed this chapter even though it was extremely short! The next one will be much longer and I'll try and make it funny!

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