4: Fighting

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Why do writers try to explain overly complicated fighting moves? It makes no sense.

Examples:

"YOU WANNA FIGHT?!" Jason shouted.
"SURE!!" Larry shot back. Jason grabbed and twisted Larry's arm. Alarmed, Larry turned around and kicked Jason in the stomach, flipped him over and did his famous double-mega-showstopper-round off-high-kick!

Lizzie ran up the wall and pushed off of it, spinning and twisting and ending her move with a OVER 9000 PUNCH!

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