back at the lynchs
ratliff; Hey dudes wassup?
ross;oh hey where were you?
ratliff;ummm nowhere
rocky; o..kay
ryland; rydel is pretty cheesed off with you ratliff!
Ratliff; what? why?
ryland;beats me thats girl stuff but you should probably go talk to her
ratliff; where is she?
ryland; gone to the theme park. she said she was meeting a friend there
ratliff; o.... right well i guess i will see you guys later then
ross; See ya Ratboy!
at the themepark with rydel and her "friend"
rydel; this is great
ben;yeah it is
rydel; hey i should call ratliff and my brothers
ben; why? [says in an angry voice]
rydel; gees man chill
ben; just dont call them! we are having a great time remember?
rydel; o okay then
ben; wanna grab some pizza?
rydel; nah im not really hungry
ben; too bad youre gonna come and get some pizza with me and youre gonna like it!!!
rydel; no ben its getting late. im sure my mom has some dinner ready for me at home. anyway i should be getting back to ratliff we have a date tonight ;)
ben; forgert ratliff youre with me now!
rydel; What? i am not! were just friends!!!
ben; Ugh rydel youre making me angry [grabs her arm]
rydel: get off me!!!
ratliff pulls up at the themepark as rydel sees his car
Rydel; [shouts] ratliff help!
ratliff sees rydel and runs towards her
ratliff; i told you to stay away from her ben!!!
ben; go away ratboy rydel only has eyes for me now
rydel; hes lying youre the only one i love ratliff
ratliff; ben get your hands off rydel NOW!!!
ben; make me!
ratliff; oh i will
rydel; no i will!!!
rydel pushes her elbow into bens chest and punches him in the lip. then she goes in for a death blow with her right leg and kicks ben right into his temple! ben staggers on his legs then plummets to the ground only able to speak three final words.......
ben; ITS NOT OVER!
then bens eyes close and his lifeless body lay on the ground
rydel; what have i done!
ratliff; he deserved it! cmon rydel lets get you home.
in ratliffs car
rydel; [sniffling]
ratliff; you seriously cant be crying over HIM!
rydel; i just killed a guy you idiot!
ratliff; well it wouldnt have happened if you had just stayed put at home
rydel; i cant live my life at home ratliff! what kinda person do you take me for!
ratliff; well right now youre being a stupid annoying person!!!
rydel; Oh i see how it is! well if im such a stupid annoying person why do you even bother with me!
ratliff; sometimes i ask myself the same question you know that!
rydel; well you can quit asking from now on becaus were OVER!!!
rydel gets out of the car and slams the door on ratliffs hand
ratliff; [yells in pain]
rydel; [shouts] NIGHT RATLIFF YOU JERK!!! ENJOY THE PAIN!!!
rydel opens the house door and stomps inside
ratliff; [whispers] alright rydel but the next time ben strikes you wont be so lucky!
HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THE UPDATE AND IF YOU GUYS HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS......I WANNA HEAR THEM BECAUSE IM RUNNING OUTTA IDEAS! I WILL UPDATE AGAIN SOON
Olivia xxx ;)
