if they're perfect, you love them (the rev/avenged sevenfold fanfic)

Jimmy's POV
Hi. I'm Jimmy. let me describe myself for you. I'm about 6'3", and lanky. I have black dyed hair that is spiked in the back with bangs that cover just my forehead, and dark blue eyes. I also have a labret piercing and an industrial bar. I was wearing black skinny jeans with a misfits shirt, and black converse.
Today was my first day of school at some catholic school. I can't pronounce the name. As soon as I walked into my first class, I could tell it was gonna be a long year. I didn't fit in with anyone. And I could already tell the teacher, Mrs. Robinson, was a bitch. She was wearing a grey, full-length dress, black heels, and squared off glasses. She had her grey hair in a tight bun at the top of her head.
I saw her roll her eyes at me, and I just smiled. She pointed to a seat at the back of the room, which I gladly took. After a few minutes, she called attendance. Right acter she called my name, I put my headphones in. It started playing Marilyn Manson "(s)aint". I pove that song.
As soon as the song ended, I heard the door open and slam shut. I took my headphones out of my ears, and looked up. I'm glad I did. There in the doorway stood the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. She was absolute perfection.
She had long, black hair with dark blue and purple streaks at the top, and light purple and silver streaks on the bottom. Her bangs swept gently across her face. Her eyeliner was in big, dark circles around her gorgeous light blue eyes. Her skin looked so soft and pale, except for the few piercings she had, which were her dimples and bridge. Well, those were the only ones I could see. She was wearing a Pink Floyd shirt, whit skinny jeans with blood splatters everywhere, and a pair of black, knee-high converse.
As Mrs. Robinson started hollering at her for being late, she ignored her and started walking in my direction. I was silently praying she would sit next to me. I guess that, for once, the odds were in my favor.
After she sat down, I saw her sneak headphones into her ears and turn on her music. I didn't want to make a scene, but I did want to get her attention. So I wrote her a note and passed it to her. Then I sat there like and idiot, waiting for her to reply to me.

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hiia!! this is the first chapter so its kinda sucky. but the story WILL get a lot better. just..... idk. I dont think many people will read the story. but plzzzz giv me feedback!! :) and dont forget to tell you mom dad brother sister best friend and saucy grandpa to read this k thnx bye!!! :)