"Pouring Rain" by UnderratedGirlAuthor - Review Part 3

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WP Name: UnderratedGirlAuthor

Title: Pouring Rain

Word Count (per chapter): 1.6k to 2.2k

Genres: Teen fiction, romance

Mature?: No

Chapter No.: 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11

LINK/DOCUMENT/PDF: https://www.wattpad.com/story/37300016-pouring-rain


Chapter Seven

Grammar and Spelling: May kakaunti kang typographical errors. I leave the searching for you, para mas challenging! (Char!)

You're actually improving! I don't know kung in-edit mo na 'to before pero maganda ah!

Chapter Eight

Grammar and Spelling: Typographical errors, especially sa his and he's. Importanteng malaman ang difference. So far, yung lang ang main concerns.

Sa punctuations, periods and commas. Minsan napagpapalit mo yung dalawang yun.

Chapter Nine

Not much concerns.

Chapter Ten

Pace: Nakakalimutan mong i-indicate na bagong scene na. Minsan nakakalito sa readers yun.

Chapter Eleven

Not much concerns.

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⏰ Last updated: May 02, 2017 ⏰

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