Hi, this is my first time writing, so please feel free to critisize! It's also super short... Hope you guys like it!
Bye-bye chiquas,
Crazed_lama
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Girl's view
My life sucks, literally, I hate my life. The bullying at school and the abuses at home are taking their toll. I've got the bruises and the scars to prove it. I just.. just can't take it anymore. I',ve tried to get away from it all, but my attempts never work... I guess there is only one thing left to do...
And that's why I'm at the Lover's cliff, kinda ironic is ins't?That's why I chose it. A place know for it's romantic views at night will be THE place where i'll perform the deed... I've come to calling what i'm about to do the deed. I guess it's because it will actually do some good... Maybe not for everyone, but for me it will, it will take me out of this place...
Just before i do it, I see a boy. A cute boy, but one of the most popular kid's at school. I don't talk to him much, and in return he doesn't bother me. I guess he's kinda nice... Nicer than some people I could mention. Okay enough talk about a life I hate, a life I dread. A life i won't miss.
So, then, right there, i finally jump, locking eyes with the boy with no name. I smile while he gasps. And i feel myself falling, and falling, it seems like i'm falling for ever and ever. I think this is the most happy i've been since, well since ever! I look back at my life and ask myself why i had not done this sooner, no one will miss me... It feels great to be finally free, even just for a couple of seconds. i laugh and then everything blacks out. the last thing i hear is the boy's screams for me, asking me if i'm alright, why did i do it. All sorts of question that even he knows are useless.
I wake up in a cloudy sort of place, very bright. -Well, I tell myself, this must be heaven, because it feels right...
The END
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Yes, I know depressing, but if anyone wants to know more about want happens i can always write more.
So yeah,
COMMENT,
LOVE,
& BABY DUCKS!
Crazed_lama