Hey guys, i'm so excited to finally share my first book (or my first book worth the public's eye). I really hope you guys are enjoying the story and would love if you guys could give me some critique, tell me what i'm doing wrong, tell me what I'm doing right. Trust me I need it. Tell me what you think is gonna happen next, tell me your favorite character, tell me anything really and I'll try my best to respond to each and everyone of you.
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I encourage you to comment. I can handle the critique. Pinkie promise!
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So what do you say, do you want to see where this is story is going, potentially enhance the entire plot then... help me with the story by.... Commenting 😀😀
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I really want to interact with you guys so lets start something, comment right now, one thing you like, one thing you dislike, and (optional) something awkward that has happened to you. I'll go first.
I'm in love ice cream,
like its my job,
all jokes aside. (You get it because the joke is on the side 😄.)
I dislike cottage cheese (who decided that was a good idea, smh).
I don't know, there was this time when I was late to class so I was rushing and I almost fell in front of my class because somebody left their backpack in the walkway. Then everyone started to laugh under their breathe and i felt like a pariah, and it was my first year at this school, and that was my 1st impression. And then a snake came down and ate me so I wouldn't be embarrassed anymore. He was a nice snake. Jk, jk..... The kids weren't laughing. 😏😏
YOU ARE READING
Case Closed
Romance***** "Peony what happened to you." "I don't know." Everything from my bra and up was drenched with water. My hair dripping wet and droplets of water scattered across my face. A part of me prayed that it was sweat, but I could taste the metal tin...
