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The story was really long

It took me a whole night to write this but it was really worth it
I hoped you enjoyed reading please vote and share with your friends too
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07.10.18 edited

I recently edited this oneshot. Reading it made me laugh and embarrassed looking at how my grammar was. I was always confident with my grammar considering the fact that I speak English more than my actual language. Apparently in this case NO 😂. My grammar was just so stupid in the "unedited version" the plot had so many plot holes. If you read it again, you might wonder why it's a bit different. I changed some parts to fill in the plot holes and be more detailed. Some changes were

• Mina is now a random girl instead of being
Y/N's childhood friend
•the petal falling as they kissed
•Their anniversary being exactly a week before spring [cause dat ain't predictable ma friend unless its based on earth's position]
•Y/N knowing Jungkook's cheating
•Y/N's grammatically wrong letter

05.26.19
•the story's title Sickness in Spring to Bloom

I also changed my writing style. Instead of their conversations being written in dialogue form I wrote it with " these"

That's that

So finally

Thanks for reading

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