Lost In love (Jeff the killer X Ticci Toby) (Discontinued)

Last author update before chapter 19 at least.

Hey guys, dont worry there wont be anymore Author updates till after chapter 19 is posted and maybe many chapters after. I want my followers opinions on a new yaoi I started on. Its about an 18 year old boy who dies in a hit an run set up by his parents and even though he is angry he accepts his death after 10 years of abuse. Its called Nightmare ghost. His death caused his family to move and his house to lay empty for nearly 20 years till a new family moves in. In this family there is a single mother working to support her two kids, one being 16 almost 17 and the other being only 8. The ghost falls in love with the boy that moved in and decides to haunt the house to get the boy to notice him. Not long after the family moves in the ghosts family shows up and asks the nw family to let them stay in the guest house for a few months.

Thats all the info I can give right now but I want to know if it sounds like a good book. Its 100% mine but I dont want to write something that no one will read. Please leave any ideas and suggestions down in the commets or Pm me. Happy scares bye readers.