A/N: Sorry I haven't updated in a while but I was at my grandma's and she has really good WiFi, opposed to my house that has terrible WiFi. Therefore I watched YouTube videos for 5 days straight. I felt that for this chapter, Tris and Tobias are the same age, so I had to change the age a little, I also took a couple characters from other factions and put them in Candor! ENJOY!
I just chose Candor! I just left Abnegation, to go to one of the most disliked factions! I don't know what was going through my head, but it mostly had to do with Tobias Eaton, Marcus Eaton's son. I've had my eyes on him for quite awhile, I know it sounds weird, but Tobias is different from other guys our age.
XXX TIME LAPSE TO CANDOR HQ XXX
When we got to Candor they took us to the dorms. I'm thankful we have boys' and girls' dorms. I heard that Dauntless initiates have to share a dorm with boys and girls! How INVASIVE!!!
Me being the clutz I am, walked right into a wall, or at least, I thought it was a wall, until a pair of arms wrapped around me keeping me from falling on my bum.
"You better watch where you're going... STIFF.", said an alarmingly deep voice says. I look up to see cold icy blue eyes that belong to none other than, Eric, an Erudite transfer, who used to tease me about being so "stiff ". Abnegation are called stiffs by all the other factions, apparently even after Choosing Day, although you chose a different faction.
"Why did you catch me then, NOSE?", I snapped back at him. Out of the corner of my eye, I can see Tobias trying to stifle a laugh. Wait, WHAT?!? He actually noticed me!?! And thought I was somewhat funny!
Eventually I've had enough fun messing with Eric, so I walk towards Tobias, because for some reason I have a sense of safety when I'm close to him. Before I know it I feel, yet another, pair of arms wrap around my waist, but this time I know that it's Tobias, and I'm ecstatic. I never knew he was interested in me! As I snuggle into him, he whispers in my ear," I like a girl who can stand up for herself and others", which makes me giggle like a 4-year old.
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FanfictionBasically I'm writing about what would happen if Tris an Tobias chose different factions, instead of dauntless, including Abnegation. I hope this isn't terrible, this will be my first book...EVER! I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!