2 weeks after
I knew i loved Jack more. But i couldn't do anything about my feelings for Daniel.
"Helen" jack says.
"Yeah?" i ask him.
"I know we havent known eachother for long but" he grabbed my hands "would you be my girlfriend?"
My eyes widen and and i jump on him hugging him and kissed him. I feel like i have never felt happier. "I love you Jack" i say as i get off of him. "Yes, yes i would love to be your girlfriend".
"And that's not it" he says getting off the bed and walked towards my bedroom door. He opened the door and got a bouquet of flowers and a small box off the floor. He handed me the flowers and them the little box. In that little box was a ring, a promise ring. It had "H, i love you" carved on it. I put it on immediately and hugged Jack again. I never wanted to let him go. He was my every 11:11 wish. I wanted to be with him forever.We hung out in my room just cuddling and watching tv, it was one of the best nights I have had in a while.
It was already getting kind of late so Jack stood up and was about to leave but I grabbed his arm to stop him. "hey, you can stay over if you want my brother won't care" I told him.
"alright then" he smiled and headed towards the bathroom door "I'm going to get a shower then if you don't mind" he opened the bathroom door and went in.
While Jack was taking a shower I changed into my bed clothes and checked my phone and there was one text from Daniel;
D: Hey, I missed you. I'll be back tomorrow night.
H: alright cant wait to see you Danny.
I text him back and put my phone on my bed side table.
I come up to my mirror to undo my braids and i hear the door open and jack come out in only a towel on because his clothes are all at his house. Since our balconies are facing eachother he goes out on my balcony and walks across to his which leads right into his room. I see pick his clothes out but i dont mind it and just keep on unbraiding.
My hair was quite long so it took me a while to take the first braid out. So when i was done with the first braid Jack was already back in my room. He came up to me from behind, grabbed my waist and kissed my neck. I turned around and kissed him. "I love you Jack" i interrupt our session. "Helen, i love you too. More than you could ever imagine."
We stop kissing and he starts unbraiding my second braid. He was so gentle trying not to pull on my tangled brown hair.Once my hair was unbraided i pulled Jack into bed with me. He kissed me a goodnight kiss on my forehead and cuddled me. Soon after we were both well asleep.
What do you guys think of this chapter i know its just about one night but a lot happened AND its finally a somewhat long chapter. Also im sorry for not posting in a while i will try to post at least every other day. Also i will probably be posting at night because thats when usally my creativity and will to write comes in.
// honestly this is one of my favorite chapters so far. What do you guys think?//
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11:11 // A Jack Avery fanfiction//
Fiksi Penggemar1st ranking: #967 in fanction on 2/12/18 2nd ranking: #150 in band on 5/19/18 3rd ranking: #61 in band on 5/27/18 "Can you please let Jack in here, I need him by my side." I let out a small sob "Yes but if he starts screaming again then I'm kicking...