Red Saree Scene - IV

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Recap:

Feeling dissappointed, she murmured to herself,
" pata nahin kya kya bol rahe hain... par jo sunna chahti hu... woh hi nhi bol paa rahe... buddhu hain bilkul... ladkiyon ko compliment karna b nhi aata... bas ek line bol di .. aur khatam? Maine itni mehnat ki .. tayyar hui.... BC ka risk lia... aur shalini mam se bachkar bhaagi.. aur yaha aakar kya mila... uffff!"

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"Kuch kaha tumne??"
He asked her, raising his brows.

"Naaa.... nahinnn ...... wohh... Aap kuch keh rahe rahe the sir??? Mujhe samajh nahi aaya",
She questioned him out of confusion and curiosity and to cover up for her mistake of blurting out her thoughts loudly.

He was scared now, of her. He was trying to figureout, if she  has heard some thing or was she feeling offended with his audacity. His words were not coming out of his mouth. He was feeling helpless. Still he tried to decipher his controlled feelings ...

"Woh mai.. keh raha tha ... ki...", he stuttered.

"Ki?" She continued questioningly.

"I meann.....     tum is saree mein..  i mean ye saree achi lg rahi hai.... tum is saree me..  i mean ye saree tum par bohot.. actually tum dono milkar....ahh...sssss..."
bending down his head to gain a lil confidence to put his words more accurately, he further spoke looking back into her eyes ,
"tum is saree me bohot achi lag rahi ho ....... "

Followed with a pin drop silence. For few moments, they were both enjoying the proximity.... later he continued to stop the awkward silence,
"and... I ... mai ... kabhi... tumhe aise.. college mein... i mean... KMA mein... you know... dekha nahin... its for the first time...So.. just kind of... "

And he was Red! No wonder he loves her so much that only complimenting her has become a difficult task for him. His shivering frame... choked voice.. everything was clearly indicating how vulnerable his condition was !

"Thanks.....     for the compliment ..." she replied shyly. Her face was glowing out of happiness. This was the moment she was waiting for. Her wish was granted. What else she could have asked for? She was feeling on cloud nine.

Coming out of daze and realizing the situation and their relationship,
"Ofcourse ... its a compliment.... just a compliment! "
He repeated it, not for her, but for himself. He said it as a statement to remind himself of him being her mentor!

"Aur ye colour? Ye kaisa lg raha hai?",
She questioned him out of curiosity. She knew he liked this colour. So she thought,  of reminding him his own wish of his dream girl wearing a red saree.

"Red??? red tum par ... i mean... red colour tum par bohot acha lag raha hai....bohot acha...",
He said dreamily.

"Red aapka favourite colour h?", she asked.

"Huhh??? Yesss .... Noooo..... ", he replied in confusion.

Naina's face fell down in dissappointment, which didnt go unnoticed by Rajveer. So, to lighten the situation and cheer her mood, he said,
"Red is not my favourite as RED IS SPECIAL FOR ME... AUR AJ SE TOH BOHOT ZADA SPECIAL ."

She blushed at his response.
"Then whats ur fav?" She asked smilingly.

"Umm Black",
He answered her.

"Black? Black ewww.... mai black nhi pehenungi",
She murmered making an odd face.

"Tum par white acha lgega... wahi pehenna.. mujhe white bhi bohot pasand hai!",
He replied with a smirk on his face.

"Huhh", is What She replied with.

"Par plz next time, chudiyaan bhi pehenna.... bas usi ki kami thi aj... I am sure tum pr chudiyan bohot khubsurat lagengi!",
He blurted out in daze!

She gulped and her mouth was making  an 'O' and eyes widened out of shock. She felt dizzy but somehow managed to stand there.

This was the moment, he realised what he just said. He started freaking out. He looked towards his left to avoid any more hassle... and decided to leave to avoid any more mistakes from his side.

"Uuhh.... knowhh... i have got to goh.. but good night... anddd... have a good nighttt..... Main.... chalta hooon...",
He said the last lines As if He was trying to tell himself that he really needs to go..

He looked upward to thank the almighty to save him from more embarrassment and to curse too for putting in such embarrassing situation. Leaving a flabbergasted Naina, he sprinted to the  nearest wall, hiding himself from her and from more embarrassment. He hid himself by resting his lower half against the wall. Smiling wholeheartedly and Cursing himself for the audacity to dream such things and to behave like a teenager, he murmered by putting his right hand on his heart to make it stop beating so fast, he warned himself,
" Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat... Is harkat k liye aapka court marshall ho jana chahiye."

After taking a deep breathe,still his hand on his heart,
"Dekho toh zara..kitni zoro se dhadak raha hai ye dil... dhak-dhak.. dhak-dhak... dhak-dhak..."
( Dialogue credit : Mrumi_Rajveer ❤ )

Then to relax and cherish the moment , he rested his head against the wall.

"Aaj agar is dil ne apne raaz khol diye hote toh.. najaane ye Rajveer kaise zinda bachta.. pta nhi Naina kya sochti.. kamaal lag rahi thi Naina. Najaane kab kaha kaise mujhe usse pyar ho gya.. Naina ka mujhse milna.. zindagi ka sabse khubsurat ittefaq kahun ya fir zindagi ka khud mujhse takrana kahun.. agar ek bar aur maine Naina ko dekh lia na... pkka mai kuch aisa kar baithunga jiski ummeed mai bhi nhi kar sakta... uff ye ladki mujhe marwa kar chodegi!"

His words were not supporting his heart. Though he was  cursing himself fr the past incident but inside, he was doing tango with rose pressed between his lips. His smile .... his flushed cheeks ... his twinkling eyes were telling a different story. A story of Love and wait!

Naina was enjoying a lot of emotions tonight. From excitement to nervousness.. to content... to shock and atlast she felt satisfied and happy! She too walked away dreamily in opposite direcfion. Resting her left side against the wall, she smilingly scolded herself,
"Stupid girl... "

Patting her head with her right hand, flushed in embarrassment, she continued,
"Ab bs bhi kar... kitna sharmayegi.. pagal. Har bar toh badi strong bankar unse apni har bat bol deti hai.. aur aj kya hua tha.. jab vo compliment kar rahe the.. tab muh se kuch nahin nikla.. school k baccho ki tarah sharma rahi thi unke saamne... but i think he liked me..."
And the last words made her fly high in the dark sky amongst the stars and the moon. She was happy, elated and all the synonyms can be used to describe this happy soul!

In heaven, God and Naveen, both were smiling and enjoying this beautiful love story of two selfless souls, deeply and madly in love. The view they were having was so blissful, that they could  not stop themselves from smiling. Raj and Naina both were hiding themselves from each other by resting against the same wall but in opposite  directions! A fine line in the form of a wall was separating them and the same wall was connecting them. What a blissful scene!

"Hey bhagwan... chudiyan bhi pehenna... i mean seriously captain?? Aur Naina... Favourite colour kya h apka?? Are guys for real??? Indono ka kuch nahin ho sakta... ab muje hi kuch karna hoga.. uff",
a concerned voice, analysed the whole situation.

Apart from them, there was nobody to witness this love story. Isn't it? NO.. there was somebody else too...who was cherishing this cute conversation of RAINA ....

But Who?????

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