My Musings, Your Perusing

Nature and You

Hey readers! This is something that I wrote. I really need your reviews on this. If you are reading this, please comment your opinions on this in the comment section. 

[This is the edited one  and ergo, a better one.]

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Look at that lustrous velvet sky

And the shimmering diamonds it possesses

Once, carefully hear the nimbly beating heart

And the multifarious emotions it suppresses.

Gaze at the gleaming ghost-white Moon

How aesthetic its crescent form sparkles,

Pull yourself up in front of the mirror

And search for the aura within the darkle.

The Sun, superciliously bright and saffron-yellow

Stands wearing the crown of the universe

And copiously pours down its infinitely-reaching rays

To light your somber and soulless body up.

Stand in the middle of the lush grass green

And the invigorating freshness it spreads

Raise your hand to touch your face

And wonder about the displeasing creases.

Feel the chilly, speedy zephyr

That gently brushes your jaded body,

And the cringe-worthy exasperation

That makes you beg for more space.

Prick up your ears to the perky rustling of leaves

And tour around the emerald greenery,

Plug your skeptical ears for a while

And try to banish the mind's incessant disharmony.

Dip your toes in the serene, ever-flowing lake

And feel the crystal water that merrily gushes,

Shut the ranting mouth adorned by the soft lips

And mourn for the hurtful spoken trash.

Enjoy the descending pearl-y rain drops

They surrender to gravity to play with you

Stop despising and pushing people away

And welcome that kind, new.

For you, the consoling, quiet nature calls

To treasure within yourselves its tranquility

Step forward with a clear mind and a clean soul

For soul will cherish forever, your beauty.