Okay sooo about last chapter..
Okay I don't know about you but I hated it and thought it was major cringe😂
Like just right now I was reading it and I was like okay not bad but there was this one part that bothered me so much and as I was reading I thought of so many things I could of put but instead I put that part.
And that stupid major cringe was when Sally called Marcus 'daddy'
That fricken word is for your fathers like why would you use it.?
I know I used it but I just did cause I don't know I thought you would like that Sally called Marcus Daddy😂😂
Don't fricken judge me I hated that part 😂😂🙄
I want to know your opinions like tell me what I did wrong like was I trying to hard cause tbh I was😂 like I kept re- reading every sentence making sure I liked it and made sure it was perfect or at least good.
Tell me. Did you
Hate it.?
Or did you
Like it.?
New chapter should come put today it should if not then tomorrow
Okaiiii byeeee ❣❣
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