2nd Shot: A Divergent FanFiction

2nd Shot

Ok, so to understand this you must have read Allegiant!!! This picks up right after Tris gets shot and see's her mother. Here ya go! Enjoy! 

Prologue

I awoke in a dark and empty room. I hear voices; I recongnized one of them but there's no way. She's dead, she died in my arms! The door swung open and in walked in David, my mother and father and someone I didnt recognize. My mother. My Father. David. I charged him but was thrown back, my hands are chained to the wall. "I told you she needed them," David said. My mother stared at me in disbelief and my Father nooded in agreence but he look disappointed. Like he expected more from me. I figured im in heaven and David's here because Tobais probably killed him. I suck in a quick breath of air. Tobais. I fall to the floor in sobs and before i know it i'm hyperventilating. I feel and hand on my back. I look up; it's the boy i don't recognize. "Your not dead," he tells me. I can't help but stare at him. He sounds calm, unfazed by the fact that i'm crying like a little child. I go to wipe my eyes, but i can't, the chains stop me. " Here, let me help you with that," he says. Before i know it im unchained and free. No-one to stop me. I can charge forward and kill David in the blink of an eye, but i don't. Something stops me. My mom finally snapes out of the haze and says, "We need to talk, follow me." I follow her down a dimily lit hallway. The strange boy behind me, followed by my Dad and David. She leads us to table and everone sits but me. My father looks at me and says, "It's ok, sit down Beatrice." I reply, " It's Tris now." 

Hey guys! This is my first story so i'm still learning! If there are any misspelled words or grammar mistakes, I'm sorry. I try and fix it but there isn't spell check or anything so i'm afraid it won't be perfect. So, anyways tell me what you thing in the comments! I know this is short but i just wanted to do a little paragraph to see it anybody liked it. Should I continue writing this or nah? If so vote/comment your opinion.