Awakening: The Rewrite

Awakening: The Rewrite - Chapter 1 (Is this a normal Flu)

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Title: Awakening Rewrite

Author: Pheoxy

Chapter 1 - Is this a normal Flu?

Getting to school early, my main problem and as usual I was late.

I picked up speed and ran straight into the corridors, shoved my bag in my locker and grabbed my books for the worst subject in the world Literature, shoot me now.

I sped in to the room and slumped into my seat.

"Make yourself at home Theia." The Teacher Ms Annual told me.

"No Problem." I replied and just grinned at her and as usual,

"So what's your excuse for being late today?" She said giving me what she thought must have been a threatening glare. I giggled and replied "I slept in." Giving me a disappointed look, I heard her mumble.

"I was looking forward to it." I giggled again and looked at Zoey next to me who was giving Brian puppy dog eyes, complete with the elbows on the tables and all. Completely oblivious to him she took a picture with her phone and then the bitch parade started.

"Ms Annual, Theia was late. Shouldn't she get a detention?" Macey, The Queen in her own mind stated to everyone. I looked back to Zoey, still oblivious to the world.

In most of my classes I have at least one of my friends, it's great.

"Zoey, do me a favor and ask him out." I asked her, breaking her out of the spell.

"What, What?" She answered, clearly she hasn't heard me right.

"Nothing," I said as I pointed towards Ms Annual who was ignoring Macey and playing on her laptop, what happened next was so funny that I ended up falling out of my chair and let me tell you. It hurt like crazy when I landed on my back.

Macey had pushed up out of her chair sending it backwards smacking it into Brian's leg who kicked it forward most likely out of annoyance, tripping over Macey who fell flat on her bum. Macey got up and started yelling at him, oblivious to her. He wasn't even paying attention with his earphones in.

Half laughing and repeating "Ow!"

I stood up off the ground and got back into my seat, I couldn't sit back with the pain that was radiating from my back.

"Are you alright Theia?" Ms Annual said looking at me with a bored expression.

"Fine!" I replied quickly, Macey was just giving me the death glare. I just ignored it and turned towards Taya who was trying to keep a straight face which made me giggle. Everyone else was in the same boat to.

After awhile the class had settled down and not much else got exciting, that is unless you count 2 guys in front of you having a spit ball fight. Then it was really fun, note the sarcasm.

After class Zoey followed me to my locker with her ongoing talk about how cool Brian is and if she was paying any attention she'd notice that I wasn't listening since I've heard the same sentences since I turned 9.

Depressing I know,

"Hey Theia, are you feeling well? You look a little pale." Zoey asked as I grabbed my bag for Gym Class, my most hated class. It used to be my favorite class until Mr. White started teaching it, I hate that guy. On my first lesson with him he made me run around the oval 10 times for no reason and he's always smacking me on the back. I'd call it physical harassment if the Teachers didn't think he was encouraging us to be healthy and bulk up. I've seen girls on TV who do that and it scared the hell out of me, like eww for one.